One way road

• Artist: Mini Haji
• Description: Life can sometimes turn upside down on you, and people turn away, this is what people can feel, so help friends and never turn on them so they never feel this way.
• Date: 05/11/2010
• Tags: road death pain turning brokenfriendship

I'm tired of talking,
I'm sick of smiling,
I look so happy,
But, inside,
I'm dieing.

Comments

[Mini Haji]

Thanx! I usually write longer poems, but I guess I need more practice!

[Chamomile Dream]

A little short, but packs a punch; I think the length highlights the emotions. However, try to use some creative literary techniques to add color to your writing.