Pain makes me scream your name

• Artist: IRunWithFlyingDolphins
• Description: Im not positive on the title yet. but i wrote this a while ago and i would use some feedback:) be honest andd thankyou rate please
• Date: 08/14/2010
• Tags: sheartbreakmegenfox songlyrics music guitar

I'm sittin here alone
Cause you're not waiting
And you've decided that you're over
But I wanna be where you are
I wanna be through the heartbreak
All the feelings make me wanna scream your name

If only I can feel this way forever
This sharp feeling inside….
pain is the only way to tell if your still alive
All those things you said were all a lie
It all wasn’t real anyway
I didn’t wanna see the day we died



Im sittin here all alone
All because your not waiting
The candle burns to bright
All the feelings make me wanna scream your name

Comments

[IRunWithFlyingDolphins]

Thankyou smile Candles is a good tittle to, I like it. And yes, Thank you i needed the feedback. I will read your work smile thanks

[Vintage Dreams]

Love, the title is horrendous :] I'd name it Candles, but that's just me. You try too hard to rhyme sometimes, then you don't rhyme at all others. Dute though. Read my work?