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comment my new poem and give it a name... Me Don't treat me like i am nothing!I am human just like you! I have feelings, can hurt and bleed just like you do! Don't treat me like i am no one! I am not a deceased ghost! Yet you pretend lik i am not even there which is what hurts me the most. Please stop ignoring me, i can't take it anymore! I feel so weak carrying this hate, i'm about to hit the floor. Hated by so many, loved by some. The few who care have made me to who i've become. A man whos smiles and joys are fake, because within him lies so much hate. Yet hidden beneath all his hate is hidden love, for he knows that some who believes in him watches from above. How can i make you see? just please for once believe me! I am human just like you! I have feelings, dreams, goals, bleed, and hurt just like you do... By, Jimmy

Posted by: jimmythegreatone Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 07:36pm

First time ever but i am questing for a Flame Sword so it would help...DONATIONS WOULD BE APPRECIATED ^_^

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Commented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 07:51pm


	Wow! This is really good and deep. You always amaze me with your poems ^^

Commented on: Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 03:22pm


	jimmy your awsome wink and nice poem wink and u sure a human but your powerfull with your writing i love it keep this up heart and what u think about the name "me" to this poem.. rolleyes

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Commented on: Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 03:52pm


	heart it. How bout 'wishing'? sweatdrop im not good at titles.

Commented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 05:11am


	whoo!! such an awesome poem...go u, ur like my fav poet blaugh i think i like this on the best so far...so deep and just wow....about the title...uhh, uhh, i like that "me" thing that someone mentioned...or use the word "me" in the title whee

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Commented on: Fri Jun 29, 2007 @ 09:19pm


	kool peom me lik the poem ^^ kirby 4eva (this wuz very random)

Commented on: Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 02:21pm


	50% of people can have a pencil and write something in a paper. 49% dont know what they're doing. 0.5% write something expecting that if mom likes it everybody will.This people live with the opinion of someone from the 49%. The other 0.5% includes u.Who know what they're doing,u like what youre doing,youre dedicated and most of all you have that magic when you grab the pencil.Congratulations! I love it!Keep this up and you'll have me as your #1 fan. heart Naiyuki heart

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Commented on: Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 08:53pm


	An outcry to society for understanding. AKA. Nice job biggrin

Commented on: Thu Jun 05, 2008 @ 04:21pm

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