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Mask (a poem i wrote cause i was bored)
Mask

I hide myself behind this smile
Keep back all the pain
No one ever knew me
Or what I felt inside
This mask of peace I wear
Surely soon will break
Releasing all the anger
Destroying all with hate

These chains forever bind me
Trapped in a sea of dark
Why does no one come for me
To save me from myself?
Love is something I've never felt
From others or my own
Slowly dying, never trying
Until it's all too late

I will never know one's love
Or give it in return
The mask that separates from all I hate
Has taken over me
And now I have to watch
As the walls crumble and fall
The anger I hold, the pain I feel
Will destroy me, killing all.


--please tell me what u thought!!--






User Comments: [2]
zac senpai
Community Member





Fri Jul 20, 2007 @ 05:04pm


^_^ Awesome poem! A little scary tho...The thought of you killing people and all...But it was still good! biggrin I give it an "A+" !

-Zac (Senpai)


WhatGetsYou0ff
Community Member





Fri Jul 20, 2007 @ 06:42pm


Geez I didnt know my friends had any talent!!!!! That was good. Better than the weird one I made up about the Mc'donalds play place.


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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