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I love anime/menga.I also love Yu Yu Hakusho It's the best.My favroite charector is Hiei.I love him.
The beging
A loud crash was herd as a small child ran through an alley way carrying a small bag of goods. This was not the first time the young child was chased away from a store.
This Village always had beggars, and homeless people. The majority of these people were orphaned kids, those whose parents had died in the war, and those who had managed to find there way from other far off villages. They would wander around looking for food and staying out of the village people’s way in fear of being hit or kicked to the side.
Out of all the kids in the village, there was one child that the Village People despised the most. That particular child just happened to be this little kid, who was now running for their life. The People of the Village hated this child with a great passion. They wished for this child to leave and never come back. They would get together in meetings to talk about how to get rid of this kid. No matter how many times they would yell at it, or how many times they would chase it away, the child would always be back looking for food. The people would hope that the child would starve to death, or freeze in the cold nights. Unfortunately that never happened.
This small child now sat under a large bridge hiding from the people who wished to dispose of it. The reason the village people had for hating this small child was because it was not human. It had never been human from the start. The child was a horrid creature that everyone wanted dead.
Not only was the child a demon but a young demon girl. But of course she was too young to tell that she was a demon. The villagers kept their kids away from her as she walked through the streets looking for food. They would pull their children away in disgust as they walked past her. They wouldn’t even make eye contact, and if they did they would make sure that it would make her turn away in shame.
But no one knew how much this small child would soon be the most important treasure of their small village. This girl that everyone hated so much, this girl that no one would look at was going to be a big part of the Village’s future. This girl, yes, this lonely helpless girl, was me. My name is Mai Kuchiki, and this is the story of my life, and how it was all put together by a stupid little mistake.





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  • [07/27/07 11:50pm]

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    KnightoftheFallen
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    commentCommented on: Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 01:50am
    Its interesting so far. You know, I'm a big critic when it comes to grammar, and spelling, and over all layout. You had a few errors. The beginning was good. I liked it.


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