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ok this is a short story i wrote. here it is (criticism is fine, i guess)


I was sitting at the dock, crying.My parents had died while i was a young girl.i've never really known what to do with my life scince then,so i would end up at this dock.Tears were rolling down my cheeks, i was gasping for air.

I thought of my friends at the ninja academy, (Tenten,Neji,Sasuke,Hinata,Gaara,Naruto,Kiba,Temarai, and sometimes my sensei, Kakashi.) i loved them all.At the thought of my friends, i smiled,my sobbing seemed to slow down to. I quickly got up, wiped the tears from my eyes, and headed for Ichiraku's ramen noodle bar. I was supposed to meet naruto there, not to mention I was getting hungry to.

As i approached the noodle bar, Naruto ran up to me, "Why are you late?" he asked almost sarcastically. "I was finding a present for Tenten" i anwsered. I was lying, i had found her present last week. I was going to give her a earth scroll and 5 brand new kunai. But her birthday was tommorow, so i thought Naruto would beleive me. After standing there for what felt like hours, Naruto finally gave in.

"Are you sure you don't want to talk about anything?".

" I'm fine Naruto, now let's just order" i replied quickly.
We were quiet for a while, all you could hear was the slurping of noodles. Probabbly of Naruto's, i thought to myself, remembering that he was a pig when it came to ramen. I looked at Naruto, I was shocked. He was gone. I saw a note on the table, i picked it up and tried to comprehend the sloppy handwriting ----
SORRY I COULDN'T PAY. I'LL REPAY YOU, DON"T WORRY! ---- I looked at the paper in disbeleif. I couldn't beleive him, this was the 4th time this week i had paid for him.

"Can i pay for you?" a evil like voice mumbled. I looked up. It was Gaara.

"Sure" i mumled. As he was paying, I looked up at him. He was blushing. I quickly looked down again. Was it something i said?

"Want to go for a walk?"Gaara asked as we were exiting the noodle bar.
"Sure " i replied loudly. I figured that i should because he just saved me from being in debt by $80.00. We walked through town, talking about how we both felt about emo guys. Some of the people we walked past gave us dirty looks, we ignored them.

We ended up under the big oak on the top of the hill.

"Hey".
"Yeah?"
" I need to tell you something".
" Sure what is it?"
" I think I love you".
I looked up at him, almost crying.
" I feel the same way Gaara" i managed to say feebly. We both smiled and leaned in to kiss the most perfect kiss ever.


THE END

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