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A slow beat coming from his heart,
with each thought of her it quickens,
uncontrolably red he sits there,
her voice comes to mind.
"Do as you wish just forgive me and forget me."
A shout came from him!
"NO! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU!"
Fighting back tears he whispered.
"But I will always forgive you."
He stared at the dagger in his hand
"I forgave you for everything, I remember you too"
He raised the dagger over his head
"But now I am alone, never again to love,
never again to live"
He shoved the dagger deep into his heart,
His last living words were recited,
"Forgive me always and forget me not,
but from now on I will be removed from thought,
tonight is the night I die,
and I will say,
I love you,
one last time"
His breath ended and so did the beat,
no longer to love,
no longer to live.

After Note: Shut up I am not that depressed now that I wrote this but still dont post a comment saying "Aww your depressed" no I do this for fun ok most of the time this isent my feelings its the feelings of my friedns so yeah not my feelings but my words

Kitsune_Aburade
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  • User Comments: [8]
    3MO_BLOOD_FOX_
    Community Member





    Thu Oct 18, 2007 @ 09:27pm


    you make some awesome poems there great i could never make something like that the only good ones i have are in mii avis journals
    good work


    LilMissFluffles
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    Thu Oct 18, 2007 @ 09:59pm


    i love this poem...it's so sad crying


    donte1204
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    Sat Oct 20, 2007 @ 02:18am


    so is this whats happening


    1-800-ismexii
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    Sat Oct 20, 2007 @ 05:16am


    hey love the journal


    Nimriel
    Community Member





    Tue Oct 23, 2007 @ 06:55am


    aaaw. are you depressed?
    oh, sorreee, i missed the after note! *coughs sarcasticaly*

    that is an amazing poem thingy though.^^
    sooo, i guess i was supposed to look at your journal about this wall of friends thingy... and now that im here, i feel like writing a insane amount of words! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. i will make sure i always have the longest comment.
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    well, thats it for now. i got bored!


    jap jap chick
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    Wed Oct 24, 2007 @ 05:44am


    OMG! that was so good and sooo sad! crying


    Roxas My Sox
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    Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 08:57am


    Wow, I've felt like that at a time in my life too. I can really sympathise with his pain


    TheVampireWerewolfDarling
    Community Member





    Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 11:57pm


    thats nice blondie...hey its me Aiyannaofthemist. i got a new account. if u dont remeber im kala's friend


    User Comments: [8]
     
     
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