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Good day ^_^ I finaly started my journal, i'll write sometime's but i may get bored a type some of a story i like to think of((I like to play writer sometimes)) so please dont get on me cuse of the spelling, and I'll write waht ahppen's to me when i
Story Pt.1, please dont comment on bad spelling, pm me
A blurry vison of a living room with a chouch turned over, and some paper's lay scartterd every where. "mom...dad....?" and weak sounding voice of a very young boy say's. He walk's slowly around the turned over chouch and look's down."...wha..." there are two white type outline's on the floor one over the other with red staines then a quick flash, two blood staned body's of a male and a female. "...."suddenly th little boy is is a eighteen year old teen,with a descent body short hair, and fist balled tightly. "What's the matter...? scared? Ha, so small, So scared. Cant do anything can you? Pathetic..." a dark shadowy figer said laigh. with greaded teeth and fist cocked back and leaning back for a strong lunge the was angry. "Basterd!!" He swang and hit, but it was odd, it felt like, as well as sounded like cracking plaster, as well as pain when hiting something soled, not like fleash. With a few strong blink's and a shaking of his head he riised he was in his bed, in his room, in his house. " Damn it..." he pulled his fist back, there was a small cracking hole there, next to many other's, some the whold chunk was missing. "What do I have to do to get a good night sleep..." he said runing his hand's down his face, then over his short cut hair. He walk's into the bathroom the is connected and washs his face and dry's it. " What am I forgeting...". Poping his neck and rubing his shoder and started to get dressed in some jeans a slvles green under shirt and a white over shirt and slowly walked down stares. " Hay a*****e!! Get your lazy a** out and about now! Damn it Ty now!!" yelled and loude strong voice from out side falled by some very storng nock's on the frount door. "Damn Dom, cant he ever show some restanit" He started but then Bom's stong voice intrupted him. " Think a*****e! What have you forgotten to day!" Ty was slient."School! s**t!" Ty tripped down the lat step landing hard on the pulm of his hand.

thuse end's the first entry 3nodding






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Kagome_son
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 21, 2005 @ 01:40am
awe *hugs you* its actually pretty good so what do you mean your expecting flames....i write but you wouldent like it that much, i dont think anyways...

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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 21, 2005 @ 01:52am
hehe i'm a pessamist what can i say ><



Lord-god-kakashi
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Rikku_the_vamp19
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 21, 2005 @ 02:01am
no reason to worry about flamers ...its good ^^


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 28, 2005 @ 03:09am
thats very good. can't wait for the rest of the story.



Nekorlie
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 08, 2006 @ 11:58pm
cool...


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