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Another random story...
This is a random story I made one day, or night I may say... I was bored like usual and maybe... Just maybe I'll carry on with this one, so if you'd be kind enough when you get done reading it if you do, please leave a comment. Be honest and tell me what you think. X3 Enjoy!

Prologue
"She's gone... No one... No one is here, no one is going to save me..." The small voice echoed in the dark room. Suddenly a white light lit up the room and there sat a girl. Her head was down and she was in a puddle of blood covered in it, she looked up with glossy sapphire blue eyes showing that she had been crying. Her jet black bangs partially covered her eyes with longer lengths of them rested on the side of her face and she had shoulder length hair. "What did he want?" She asked sadly as a tear fell down her right cheek, "why did he kill mommy?" She clenched her fists that where on the ground in the blood. "Why...." She whispered looking down again, "why...." She sniffed. "Why!?!?!?!?" She cried looking up.
"Stop!" It was dark again but there was no blood, instead a bed. The girl looked around, her hair was longer now, her bangs were the same and now looked to be sixteen years old. She was breathing heavy then took the blankets off and stood up off the bed starring at the floor. Her hair fell to the length of her waist as she stood and she looked up at her moonlit shadow from the window beside her bed. She starred at her shadow then a larger shadow covered it and she whipped around to see a larger figure standing behind her. She began to back away with wide eyes, she backed away into a wall and pressed against it.
"Don't be afraid." The figure said, it was a mans voice that was chilling. "I'm just want something from you." He grinned. The girl starred at the shadowed figure with terror struck eyes.
"No, leave me alone." She hissed baring her teeth showing her fangs. The figure disappeared allowing the moonlight back in but the girl didn't relax. Suddenly the man appeared in front of her and grabbed her neck slowly lifting her from the ground pressing her harder against the wall.
"Don't worry, it'll be quick and painless." He whispered smiling showing his fangs. The girl grabbed his hand digging her claws into them trying to get free as she gasped for air.
"Y... You're not going to get your way." she gasped and the man squeezed his hands tighter.
"Oh? And what makes you think that?" He asked. The girl lifted her legs and kicked him in the stomach making him loose his grip and she fell to the floor. She rubbed her neck and slowly stood up, the man backed away letting her stand, "It's going to have to take more than little kicks to kill me you know." He laughed.
"I know that." The girl said holding up her hand and a dark orb formed then it shot itself at him hitting his chest sending him back against the opposite wall. The girl smiled but then felt the man's presence gone, she looked around alert and took a step forward. Suddenly a jolt of pain shattered her right side and she fell to the floor holding the wound as her blood spilled everywhere.
"Miss me?" the man asked, the girl looked up to see him holding a sword and he licked the blood off it's sharp blade smiling evilly.
"Not one bit." she replied staggering to her feet still holding her side, the man disappeared again then reappeared in front of her. The girl looked at him but before she did anything he stabbed her in the stomach and the blade protruded through her back.
"Your soul is mine now." He said starring down at her.
Chapter 1.
It was still dark in the room and outside as the girl shot up in her bed breathing heavy and she looked around. "It...It was just a dream..." She breathed, her eyes were still filled with fear. She threw the blankets off of her then she stood up and stretched, she wore a black tank top that went down to her waist and short blue shorts. She looked around then her gaze set on her clock, it read: 5:30 am. She sighed making her way to her closet, three days of that same dream... I cant deal with it now that I have to go to school... Again. She thought as she looked through her closet, she took out some clothes and began to get undressed.
She now wore a black short sleeve shirt that was as long as her tank top, baggy dark blue jeans, black fingerless gloves, and small black shoes. She walked over to a small dresser and pulled out a brush to brush her hair, she put it up in a bow leaving her bangs down with the longer parts of them that rested on her shoulders then placed a black head band on her head. She looked up on top of the dresser where a mirror was placed, she moved her bangs a little then turned to leave the room. She closed the door behind her and looked up, there was a door there that was open. Inside was a bathroom but she turned to the left walking down the dark hallway then came out to a bigger room. To the right was a kitchen, to the left was a living room with a small couch, a stereo in the far corner, and TV. Then straight ahead was another door. She turned right into the kitchen and looked at the living room at the stereo and it turned on. Wait... I cant just do that anymore.... She thought shaking her head as the music began to play, it was a piano playing a slow and sad melody. She sighed and turned back to the kitchen, she walked over to the counter where a coffee maker was. She turned it on since it was already prepared, she then set out a mug and spoon. She hummed the same melody as the stereo was playing until it ended then another piano solo came on and someone began to sing, it was a man. Just introduce yourself like always... Hi, I'm Masha Suzumiya and I.... The coffee maker began to beep signaling that it was done. Masha turned and shut it off then poured some of the hot liquid into the mug.
"It's too late to apologize.... It's too late." She sang along with the song sadly as she stirred sugar and creamer into the coffee. She then lifted the mug to her lips and sipped it, "it's too late..." She mumbled. ((Yes it's Apologize by One Republic... DEAL WITH IT!!!))
After finishing her coffee and brushing her teeth, Masha began to turn off all the lights then made her way to the door that was in between the kitchen and living room. She grabbed her black coat off the rack putting it on quickly and picked up her black bag heaving it onto her back then opened the door after unlocking it, "I'm leaving!" She announced walking out of the house locking the door after closing it, knowing that no one would reply. The sun was still below the horizon as she walked away from her house, it was a dim blue color outside, the air was cold and still as she began to walk down the street in silence. She shoved her hands into her coat pocket as her warm breath made little vapor clouds in front of her then they disappeared as fast as they came. She turned a corner and made her way to the main road that lead to the school, she walked in a rhythm each time her foot hit the ground. one, two, three four. One, two, three, four. She thought as she mouthed the pattern of steps keeping her pace, the wind began to blow as the sun began to rise above the horizon sending rays of warmth and casting shadows over the land.
Masha soon came into sight of the school, she starred at it as she approached. She stopped hearing something coming at her and she whipped around to see someone coming at her and fast. She quickly moved to the side as they passed, she watched as the blur of red and black sped passed her. The wind came afterwards blowing Masha's hair onto her face and she brushed out of the way and continued to walk when she smelled something familiar. A smell that she would never forget, she looked down to see a trail of blood drops leading to the school. She looked back again and saw someone walking towards her holding something, this was strange, even for the early morning. The person disappeared and Masha's eyes stretched wide, oh no... She thought and turned and began to run fallowing the trail of blood. Suddenly someone appeared five feet ahead of her making her skid to a halt, she then saw that the item being held was a sword.
"Who... Who are you?" She asked standing her ground starring at the person as they took a step closer, she saw that they had black hair, short black hair with bangs. Obviously it was a guy, and he wore a black buttoned trench coat with black pants under it, and just maybe a shirt too, she couldn't tell and didn't really care.
"I, am Hitsomaru." He grinned, he looked to be her age or twenty. As he got closer she notice that his eyes were slanted and jet black, his skin was pale and that as he grinned she saw fangs protruding from his upper lip. They were larger than hers and more sharper, her gaze lingered to his hands seeing his sharp nails.
"A vampire." Masha said narrowing her eyes, his grin stretched into a wide mischievous smile reveling his fangs even more.
"Ah, and I sense something from you. You're not just a normal human are you?" He asked as his eyes examined her head to toe.
"And what business is that of yours?" She hissed baring her own fangs at him shifting her feet a little just in case she had to run.
"It's mainly the leader's but I'm interested myself." He said raising his eyebrows.
"Well then that's one thing you're just going to have to figure out yourself." She said pressing her foot onto the ground pushing forward as she used the small space in between them to run then she pressed her foot upwards and jumped over him, "good luck." She grinned as she landed perfectly on her feet then took off running.
"Oh, I don't need luck." Hitsomaru said turning to watch her go, I found our next target. He thought still smiling. Then another person appeared beside him, he was a bit taller with longer hair that rested on his shoulder blades and was the same color, so was his eyes. He was just as pale as Hitsomaru and wore a darker blue trench coat and black pants. His gaze was set on Hitsomaru as he held his hand behind his back standing straight.
"Are you sure that this is the one?" He asked, his chilling voice would turn your blood to ice.
"Yes, Masa-sama." Hitsomaru replied with a nod. Masa looked at where Masha ran off, she was gone now.
"Good, now come. We need to make preparations." Masa said disappearing, Hitsomaru looked back before disappearing himself.


PLEASE, I repeat... PLEASE leave a comment on saying what you think about it! Please, please, please, please! I want to know how people think about this so I'll know to write more or not... So once again for the whatever-ith time I've said it... PLEASE COMMENT!!!! Thank you if you did or is going to, and I hoped you enjoyed!!!!






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Cxck Sucking Pigs
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 04:58am
COOL XD


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 05:00am
Ah! Thank you very much! I thought you people ignored me but it lets me know that people actually care. Thank you once again!!! X3 I hope you enjoyed it!



Masha-sama17
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Exploding Head Syndrome
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 05:05am
That was cool and yet scary at the same time. biggrin eek


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 05:08am
Well I try to make it where the reader would want to know more and want more. Heh heh, so I like to make scary/action scenes sort of. Well thanks for commenting!



Masha-sama17
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Itchigotchi
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 06:51am
So awesome! Very scary and bloody so far heh heh, but it is vampires after all. She has a lot of description about her hair....?
Meh, I LOVED IT! its awesome please continue I wanna know the whole story.


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 06:08pm
Ah yes thank you, I just try to put thing in detail so the reader would get a good picture. X3 I still have to edit some things since I don't really have Microsoft Word, I have something else that I type these on so it's a bit different. So yes, I'll try to write more when I can. Thank you!



Masha-sama17
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Podobo
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 10:20pm
omgosh! i lurved it! so descriptive! i cant wait for the next chapter dude!


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 01:51am
Wow. Very good story. ^.^ I like it!



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batmanluver01
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 06, 2008 @ 05:42am
I thought it was very.......how can i put this, in my own words..........Its was very, very ookie,ooooooooookkkkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeee. yesh, thats the word


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