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Transformation (Vampire Poem)
On the cold brink of Death
I saw you're eyes peering into mine
I accually thought it was my time.
I knew I was going to die.
As I whispered those precious words i love you....
and welcomed the Gods to take my life
I felt a sharp pain in my neck
the fast beating ceasing in my chest
I opened my eyes to see the bloody fangs
Tears dripping apon my face
The transformation was allmost complete
You bent down, neck to my lips
I sunk in my fangs, tasting the blood oh so sweet
the transformation was now complete






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Solav
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 01:57am
Applauds," very well said for thee lass, true its not a steady flow to say the least, I could tho picture it out and I liked it alot ^^"


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 22, 2008 @ 03:14am
thats really good! i like that so much better then my stories!


rawr :3

XRainbow_Eating_UnillamaX
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