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Comic!!!!!! Please read and tell me if you like it.
im going to make a comic that is based on Megaman Starforce. Heres an overview for what i got on the first chapter. The year is 220X and extraterrestrial life has been found. People have lost the need for PET's. People use Transers now and create brother-bands with there closest friends. We meet a young boy in the fifth grade in Echo Ridge named Connor. His father was part of an expedition in space when something terrible went wrong. The space station mysteriously disapears. As a result of this Connor has taken himself out of all personal relations with anybody but his mother and one of his dads closest friends David who worked at the space station NAZA. Every night Connor goes out to Vista Point to look up at the stars just hoping that he'll see his father. Before he left the house that evening David was over talking to his mother and he gave him the visualizer that his father wore. Connor left for Vista Point when he is stopped by three kids from school which he never goes to. The leader of the group, a girl anounced herself as Luna Platz class prezident of class 5-A echo ridge elementary and these two behind me are Zach and Joe. She asked Connor why he never comes to school. All he said was none of your business just leave me alone. Luna, shocked, watched as he walked to Vista Point. Connor arrived and sat down just looking up. He put on his fathers visualizer and saw roads in the sky. Amazed he stood there in awe when his transer started to make a beeping noise. It got faster and faster until. BAM! something hit him. He saw a being that just looked at him and asked, can you see me. Connor couldn't say a word but just nodded. The creature said thats odd, you humans arent supposed to be able to see us FM-ians. Maybe its those funny looking glasses your wearing. Connor asked, who are you? The creature said, i am Omega-xis but just call me Mega humans don't usually get it right. Just then they heard a train, but it was the old broken down train at the bottom of Vista Point. It had crashed throuh the fencing that was holding it and stopped on the grass. Mega said, EM viruses!. Connor only had time to say , What..? when Mega flew into his transer. He said EM viruses! they control and wreak havoc in electronic devices. You use battle cards on earth right? Connor replied, Yeah. Mega asked him if he had a blank one. Connor said yes. Mega told him to place it on his transer. When Connor picked it up it had Mega's data on it. Mega said, now put on your visualizer and find a wavehole. Connor walked over to what looked like a vorex and Mega said, slide your card with my data on it through your transer. When you do we will become one, an EM being. Connor yelled, What!! im not gonna do that. why should i do this?! mega replied, if you dont, the viruse will destroy your beloved town! Connor swiped the card through the transer and Mega came out. Mega grabbed onto Connor and they merged!


Anyway thats the first chapter. Hope you like it. Please leave a comment on my profile and tell if you like it.






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GothicSnow822
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commentCommented on: Sat May 31, 2008 @ 04:33pm
TOO MUCH READING BUT GD


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