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uummmmmm......idk^^
poetry be me!! its called MY LIGHT
I feel the waves dragging me under
I feel the cold water everywhere around me
I feel breathless though while the waves drift me back and forth inder the water I feel stressless,
like all the worries in my life have all faded away
I look closer and suddenly the waves look beautiful
the slow motion it moves in,moving my hair gracefully under the water
but I feel theres something missing, i realize there is no light,
I suddenly long for the light while the darkness over flows me
I feel pain as I sink deeper and deeper into the darkness
I feel lonliness, the burn, and I cant see through the frightening dark
I start longing for the light more and more each second
I look up and i can see the pure pathway to my life
I feel the touch of a warm hand, and I am over flowed with pure light
the darkness starts to fade and revile itself to me
I finally break through the water and can feel the air and life flow inside me
and I can finally here the words I longed for the whole tome
"you are my child and i am the light thaat always guids you,always follow the light"
and i feel the peace and purness throughout my body.

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ^^ NYA!






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undertaker696
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 13, 2008 @ 10:33pm
lacie it awesome biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 10:43am
Awsome poetry i love it. ninja heart heart



Infantry Metal
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Darkmetal SuPeRmAn
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 15, 2008 @ 10:35am
i like it u never told me you were a good poetry writer? biggrin
i'm just commentin'
sorry if you didn't wanted me to


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 02:25am
...this isnt that cheesy...
i like it...



Darkmetal SuPeRmAn
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Ryocko_is_richeous
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commentCommented on: Thu May 15, 2008 @ 11:52am
Great poetry!! You have talent no doubt, you can knock the sox off of william shakespeare! lol but seriuosly, nice poem writing, i like it very much. wink mrgreen


commentCommented on: Thu May 15, 2008 @ 11:53am
I'm a friend of lightning by the way.



Ryocko_is_richeous
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