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If you fall, I fall. If you love, I love. If you die, I die. If you saw me, I wouldnt notice. If I met your eyes, you wouldnt meet mine. If you cheat, I lose. If I cry, will u leave. If your gone, I cry harder. If you notice, I just cry. If you you come back, I stop. If you give me a loving hug, i'll stay in your arms. If you kiss me, i'll kiss back. If you were here.... I wouldnt feel like this. If we were friends, it wouldnt be the same If you knew my past, i would know yours. If I lost my heart, would you bring it back? If I ran away, would you follow? If I hurt u would you leave? If my heart breaks, will you put it back to gether? If I died, would you cry? yes i know its short... but its from da heart.... and leave ne comments... i dont care if u want to flame mi.... i really dont care.... this is my very first poem..... a lil repetitive yah but apparently its good^^

Posted by: 1Yin8 Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 11:41pm

being unloved is the punishment for the crime of loving....

-namie amuro~~ should i love him? ~~-

Dont let it get to you...

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Orchid Miku
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Commented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 08:54pm


	Very deep, but very expressive! Love the angst! You've got me all inspired now, lol.

Commented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 12:34am


	Wow...... crying beautiful (weird words for a guy, I know....) it's just like you said, it feels like reading them from a persons inner heart crying

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arabelle elizabeth
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Commented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 02:15am


	crying crying crying crying i heart that poem...i remember wen i read it at school so yea i didnt just read it...i couldnt crying crying crying crying ...btw...u have been LOGGED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in a loving way... crying

Commented on: Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 05:07am

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Commented on: Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 05:46am


	you spelt feel wrong BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A$$HOLE!!

Commented on: Sat May 17, 2008 @ 10:11pm


	Very well done. Glad I wrote it down. Hmm.... Now, what songs do you think will go well w/ this? wink Yes, it's what you think. I do have another AMV up too. xD. BTW, why did BlackxOkami call you an @$$hole for spelling 'feel' wrong? I wonder why she didn't say anything when I spelled 'poem' wrong....

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