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Some poems I wrote
Online Love

Her personality is as beautiful as a thousand roses in bloom.
My love for her is so great it'll lead me to my doom.

Her kindness is as plentiful as the sun's great shining rays.
I swear to the stars i'll follow her untill the end of my days.

I would do anything to make her smile even if just a grin.
My love for her is so great & terrible it has to be a sin.

But the truth is i've never laid eyes on her before in my life.
Yet the moment I met her my heart felt as if it was stabbed by a knife.

This woman I so desperatly love, I don't even know.
To love some one I met online, have I sunken this low?

Online or not this love is true & to her memory i'll hold fast.
This love of mine & the memory of her forever they will last.






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TrudytheeGreat
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 03, 2008 @ 01:02am
:] thats shweet heart


commentCommented on: Tue Oct 07, 2008 @ 12:47am
wow where did you learn that?



TheAncientFlower
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mangaluvr527
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 16, 2008 @ 01:55am
wow u r amazing...i luv ur poetry?
is this frm a real experience??


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 18, 2008 @ 06:12am
=.0
wow. never took u for a poet.



chomping_chibi_chobit
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YesImThatRandomGirl
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 05:35pm
awwwwwwwwww if only that girl knew how much you cared about her


commentCommented on: Wed Oct 22, 2008 @ 01:19am
*barf*
Plah online love >X P
Online people SUCK!!!!!!!
But nice poem.



SpacedOut420
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xXoX--S--XoXx
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 10, 2008 @ 09:49pm
aww..
Your poems are amazing n_n x


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 04:08am
your an amazing poetry writer.



l Captivate l
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XXPunkGothicVampireXX
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 06:52pm
heart aw this is sweet kinda lol is this from a tru experience? heart


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 19, 2009 @ 10:41am
Wow Who Was This?!?! She Must Be A Great And Amazing Person...



xXBleeding_ScarzXx
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6SFul
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 26, 2009 @ 01:21am
This poem is so beautiful and breath-taking


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 08, 2010 @ 06:24am
>.> I Wanna Sign ^.^



xXBleeding_ScarzXx
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Breathless Oxygen
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 06, 2010 @ 06:44am
this is amazing <3


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 07, 2012 @ 10:58pm
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow ;o heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart



ii-Lady Kai-ii
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