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Love_Lane951
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I ran. I ran though the dark alleyway with the white cloaked assassins attacking me. I took a trash can and threw it behind me, hopeing that one of the assassins is a complete clutz. It could have been the dence fog, but i could hear metal scraping the pavment. Then I listened for footsteps. There was only one following me.

"Your gonna die, mutant!"

"That is if you can catch me!" I stopped. there was a wall in front of me so i looked both ways and went left. Fight as i started to run again i caoul hear my pursuer let out a loud sigh. I started to run faster. After about four minutes of running down the alleyway I stopped. I looked around and relized this was an area were there were a lot of drug dealers. I took about three deep breaths and relized stopping was a really bad idea. I looked the way I came in and out of nowere the assassin gave a loud female scream and came out of the fog in the other direction. I got up quickly and tried to fight, but she took my arm and pushed it up to my back then took out a dagger and lunged it into my side.

"F***! THAT HURT LIKE HELL! DAMN!" I put my other arm to my side and felt the blood trickle through my fingers.

"Just you wait untill my teamates get here, mutant, you'll regret your very existance." Tears started to drop form my eyes from the pain of the dagger. I couls hear slow footsteps in the distance. I could tell it was the other assassins. I squinted. It was them all right. They ameriged from the fog and one of the assassins had his arm over the the other ones shoulder and was limping. I was willing to bet he was the one that fell. Once my captor gave the ok they all took off there hoods. I looked the injured man and there was a hge blood stain with shiney things sticking out of his chest. It was glass. The other man started to ask me questions, but I remained speechless. He had a scar on his left eye that made him look evil. He walked over to me and bent down so he was eye level.

"You gave us quite the chase there. I haven't had that much fun in ages. So if your a mutant, whats your mutant power?" I kept my mouth shut. I was about to say something, when he ripped my hand from my bloody side and stared at my wrist.

"What are you doing?"

"You seem 17. Haven't unlocked your powers so in a desperate attept, you tried to use radation so quicken your powers growing process. Am I wrong?" He was right, but i wasn't gonna admit it.

"Why is your kind so violent?"

"Becasue you come into our home and kill us for no apperant resaon! Then when we fight back, thats what you show to the public." The interigator leaned close to my face and wispered.

"Your kind don't deserve to live."

"SO WHAT NOW YOU ARE GODS? YOU MAKE SOMETHING LIKE US THEN CALL US MONSTERS! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU TO POINT FINGERS!?" I tried to break free, but my captor was too strong.

"No it is my job to keep peace. And you filthy mutants cause all the trouble." I tried to break free to punch his face in, but my captor shoved my arm closer to my head almost dislocating my arm. A scream of pain echoed through the alleyway, but no one helped me.

"Im not the mutant. You are!"

"Whats your name, mutant?" I looked to my left. I didnt want to reply. He walked over to the injured man and started to look at his wounds. The man looked back at me. "Well do you?!" For every second I didnt respond I could feel the dagger going deeper and deeper into my side.I started to get mad. There was something growing inside of my stomach. I looked over at the man. He got up and walked over to a pile of rubble and picked up a pipe. He walked over to me." So kid. do yoU HAVE A NAME!?" He started to bash my head with the pipe and stoped after a minute too look at his friend's wound. That feeling started to grow out of proportion. I broke my captors hold and ripped her arms off. I started to beat her with her own arms untill i took the dagger from my side and jumped on her. I stabbed her in the chest about eight times untill

I stopped and slowly started to get up. I took a glance back at the others and they held there handguns ready to shoot me. I kicked up the dagger, took the handle and lunched it at the wounded man. It went about four inches into his forehead, then i jumped up and as he fell I kicked the dagger father into his head. I hidden assassin flew out of the fog trying to grab me, but I caught him and smashed him itno the wall where I kneed him in the groin untill he was uncountious. I picked up the dagger and slit his throat. The blood poured all over my white shirt. I turned around.

The interigatior had two guns pointing at my heart. I walked over to him and lick the blood that fell onto him from my hair.

"You must have a lot of courage to face me after what i did to your friends." I pushed him to the ground and sat on his chest. He tried to reach for thr gun that he dropped, but I took his arms so they couldn't move. "So do you have a name?" I started to bash his face in with my fists. I stopped and took a deep breath." Well do you have a name?!" I picked the pipe he was beating me witha and rammed it into his face about six times. When I stopped his face was all bloody and brusied. I threw the pipe away.

"Why?"

"WEEL DO YOU HAVE A NAME,HUH HUH!WELL DO YOU!" I punched hin the face a couple more times and took the gun and wasted the last six bullets on his head.I threw the gun and got up. This power that I felt was like a gift from god. My whole life i felt empty. This was the most alive i've ever felt. I now knew my pupose in this world. It was to kill nothing more and nothing less.


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GreySarasa
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 28, 2008 @ 05:48pm
Better than the last time. Your dialouge is more beliveable, but the spelling looks like a chimp did it. Also, you put some things too notchalontly, like "I ripped off her arms." Try something with more emotion like, "I grabbed both her wrists and pulled back, insane feelings of hatred growing inside me. Through the sickening snapping of bones and her violent screams, my grin grew wider. To see her in pain, to see her under my control, filled me with a lust for more." Or something to that effect. Don't copy that or else it would be plagerising.


comment Commented on: Tue Aug 26, 2008 @ 02:06am
Is this supposed to be tmnt?



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