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Random stuff, but I will mostly be using it for my story I will soon be writing.
((A/C:Hello my readers
I have a great story Idea that I am going to start in my Journal.))


The Lord of the Underworld ruled with a mighty and terrible wrath. All feared him, humans, demons, even most of the angels. He had great control and power. He decided to get the one thing he wanted most, the surface world. He wanted to rule over it like he ruled over the world below. Soon though, the God's and Goddesses heard about his plan to rule the surface and send it into utter chaos. They worked fast, creating an Army of Angel's to protect the human world form the darkness. The most beautiful of the Angel's journied to the gods and pleaded to them to listen to her before sending out a whole army of Angel's. She begged them to let her sacrafice herself to the Demon Lord to protect her poeple. As the Plan of the Demon Lord began to start, the God's finally let her take on the job. She traveled to the world below, amazed at how fast the Demon Lord had taken over the once paradise and the chaos that had slowly became of the once peaceful place for humans. Once clean and purified rivers, were polluted and undrinkable water and sludge. The vallies across the land that held the planet's medows, orchirds, towns, and vast forests were ruined. The forests were nothing but ash in a forgotten wasteland. The medow's were also set ablaze and burned nonstop. The orchirds produced rotted fruits, infested with insects and diseases. And finally the towns were abandoned and totally destroyed. She traveled Demon Lord's Palace, sneaking in through the vast gaurds and enemies that would surely kill her if spotted. Once inside, she quickly made her way to the thrown room. The Demonic Ruler despied the Angel race. But, he was quickly captured by her beauty and kindness and quickly fell inlove when he spotted her. She too, fell in love with him. As much as he wanted, he couldn't bring himself to destroy her. He kept her in the palace, not letting her leave until she promised to marry him and bear his children. She finally aggreed to his conditions, with some of her own. He had to go back to rueling the underworld, and he couldn't threaten to destroy the human world again. She kept her promise, and soon, she bared twins, one, with pitch black, Demonic wings, matching black hair, and blood red crimson eyes. The other, had the purest of white Angel wings, snowy white locks, and shimmering misty blue optics. The Demon Lord was thrilled to have heirs to rule the Under world when the time was right, he soon called off the invasion and the planet slowly returned to normal after a short time. The Angel stayed with her love while the children grew, nurturing her Angelic son and teaching him the ways of the Angel's, never leaving his side, while her husband soon became fond of his Demonic son teaching him the ways of the demons and how to soon become ruler of the Underworld. From their blood lines, the children weren't accpeted in the normal lives with the humans, and so, their parent's decided to raise them where they belonged. For the Angel boy, the Realm of the Angels, for the Demonic boy, the Underworld. Centuries passed and the boy's grew up, not remembering anything about one another besides they were brothers.

((A/C: Okay, this is just the Prolouge, I will write the first chapter in a few days.))






User Comments: [9]
ShayBayBay
Community Member





Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 07:13am


I FREAKING LOVE IT!!

BRING ON CHAPTER ONE!!! biggrin


Sm0rz
Community Member





Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 07:24am


NICE.
WILL IT BE INCESTUAL YAOI?!
xD


C H 3 W Y C O N D O M
Community Member





Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 02:10pm


i love it!! :3 its like i could see it and everything razz maybe i should show you one of my stories too biggrin what you think should i show you my stories? also i want to read the 1st chapter hurry i cant wait no longer!!


hi522566
Community Member





Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 03:03am


zomg i love it mrgreen blaugh you better write it unlike the other one stare


VimKitty
Community Member





Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 12:30am


Whoa, total awesomeness! You're pretty damn good at this =D
I'm with Sm0rz on this one, I vote for incestual yaoi mrgreen


Sabaku no Rinoa
Community Member





Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 01:01am


One word... AWESOME!!!!!!
keep going I'm really into it, I really like it!
fersure I'll reed the nex chapter whee
your idea is very cool!


mardona complex
Community Member





Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 03:08am


I like the use of details describing the chaos. Good job, but keep an eye out for grammatical mistakes.


-Bipolar Sox-
Community Member





Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 03:49pm


that was awesome!
hurry and write chapter one!!!!
lulz. im very hyper. :]


The Johnnyb
Community Member





Fri Apr 03, 2009 @ 11:46pm


by the way, the whole "dude licking the other dude" thing? Yeah, i think that is...oh what is the word? oh yeah WRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAH!!!!!!!!!!!! W T F??? burning_eyes


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