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Chapter 1: Maybe the Beginning

(reminder: My name is Dominick/Dom and I appear only because I am the real guy behind my RP's and they appear as my other sides)

~Setting: A demonic bar in the rough parts of a human city, Dom entered to enjoy a silent night alone after one of his hunts but is now about to get into another fight.~

Dom: *is wearing all black outfit along with a tipped, long black hat, From his look. He shows off the obivous that he's a hunter*

Dom: *sighs* Another shot

Bartender: Same one?

Dom: *looks at him* Naw, Make it stronger. *takes out a pack of cigs and lits one*

Bartender: Alright *goes off and mixs some drinks*

~Door slams open as three demon punks enter the bar~

Demon 1: Yo Boss, I can smell a human in here...and it ain't my nose again!

Demon 3: Yeah...me can smell him too...

Demon 2: I know you idiots *has a fed up look* that's why we're here =__=

*Demon 1 is a normal looking demon that isn't too strong but isn't weaker then a human. Demon 3 is a heavy muscled demon who isn't very smart but can rip a tank apart. And Demon 2 is the leader wearing a black punk outfit, Is stronger then both of them*

Dom: . . . ~please let this not be their night~ *keeps smoking the cig*

Bartender: *comes back with the drink as he sets it down he speaks* I don't want any trouble in here got me?

Demon 1: shut it old man! Where's that dirty human!?

Demon 3: Yeah, Me smash him into bits!

Dom: *picks up drink as I drink it down* *smokes*

Demon 2: *sniffs the air and smells my aura* *points me out* YOU!

Dom: ~********~ *keeps smoking*

Demon 3: *places his giant hand on my shoulder* He's talking to you flithy Bastarda

Dom: *puts out cig and speaks calmy* Unless you want me to shovel that entire arm up ur a**...I suggest you all leave me alone

Demon 2: Is that so? Boys! Get him!

Demon 3: Arrghh! *trys to grab me*

Dom: *grabs his wrist and toss him away like nothing*

Demon 1: *draws a sword out and slashs at Dom*

Dom: *quick draws my blade and cuts him down a notch*

Demon 3: *gets back up and draws a Axe* YOU DEAD! *slams it down towards Dom*

Dom: *Cuts the Axe in half along with his head*

Demon 2: Pretty good for a Pu-men, Can you han-- *He falls in half*

Dom: *quicked dash across him cutting him down* Don't you dare call me human...I,m more then what you'll ever be flith

~All burn into ashs as Dom sits down~

Dom: what a ******** night =__= *drinks more*

Bartender: Thanks for not making a mess

Dom: No fcking problem *drinks more*

~The door opens loudly again as Dom draws a gun out thinking it's another Demon...but it's a girl~

Dom: O___O....

???: O___O

Dom: *places it away as I turn around and go back to drinking*

~She draws closer to Dom and sits next to him~

(Author's Note; This is actully a part of another story I wrote...but I never got around to it, So yeah. It's strange for me to be writting this at this time due to my problems...but hey! It's a story!)

Yakari: *smiles* Hey ^__^ My name's Yakari, What's your's?

Dom: . . .*looks at her and feels kinda warm* Dominick, You can call me Dom for short.

Yakari: Dom? hm...sure ^_^

~Both talk and drink together till the sun rises~

Yakari: I have to leave alright?

Dom: *Nods* Get some rest ok?

Yakari: No problem ^_^ *gives her number out* Here, my cell ^_^ Bye

~She leaves~

Dom: *leans back in the chair* *sighs* ******** Hell...When is my next hunt...

~One Demon enters, Looking to kill~

Dom: . . .maybe sooner then I thought






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Rage of Despair
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 10:23am
Be honest and give me ur opinons ^_^ I might just write more O_O


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 09:48pm
i liked it acutally ^__^ reminds me of devil may cry but its sounds good. and you even included yakari 3nodding



BitBit90
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Rage of Despair
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 26, 2008 @ 05:07pm
Thanks, It was apart of another story I wrote ^^;; And I wasn't trying to aim for a DMC feel...But eh. I,ll write more when MORE ppl see this TwT


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