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Chapter 3. of My Story
I broke the silence by asking more questions "Wat troubles you??" i asked. his answer was a quiet sigh an " my family of Kintomitoreas was eaten by the birds" more silence fell upon us, it felt as though the weight would soon distroy me so i broke it once more "So you've seen the birds?? Were did they go??" he pionted to the north. . . . . strait at. . . . . the Mt. Tropica Paridice (which was no paridice to an other demon, human, or animal that came exept the tropical birds of paridice). I had but 1 more question that would bring mine an his fate together. . . . "would u care to join me in a search to find my clan an that misfit wolf demon pup?". . . . .there was no answer, for the Kintomitro was gone. . . . . .

I had reached the mountan when I felt a gust of wind that almost blew me off the mountan! I looked in every direction only to find that i was being curcled by the tropical birds of paridice, right then I thought it was all over when a blue looking creature ( it moved to fast to tell wat it was) came an smacked the birds right in the face an before I knew it had lifted me from the ground an was running to a cave.
I noticed that its smell was fermiliar. . . i took a quik sniff an I knew it was the cat like mouse creature!!!I asked it "Why have you come?? Did you know i was in danger before i knew it myself????" he had no answer to my question but he did say " theres no time for talking, we
must get to the cave" then a gust of wind blew me out of his hands an onto the ground he stoped an saw that a bird was heading right to me as i hid behind my hands ready. . . . .ready to die. As the bird came the wind stoped an so did time! I got up wondering wat was going on, could i have stoped time? of course I didnt I was just a kit, an no cat demon can stop time! but it was true my will to save my friends an family became my strength an power as I got up i saw a shine come from the eye of a bird that had not stoped moving, it was a crow, a blueish red crow with the prettiest of eyes, they were goldish but more like a shadowing gold, an the bird droped a shinney jewel in my hands i stared at the thing an sudenly I felt a lust for blood, I felt like I had no end of power! I felt . . . I felt . . .dangerous.


TO BE CONTINUED. . . . .






User Comments: [3]
Sillisy
Community Member





Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 09:55pm


crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying Y DO U HATE SO MUCH U WONT COMMENT PPL!!!!!!!!????????????


Tayoshi Chan
Community Member





Tue Nov 11, 2008 @ 05:25pm


its not that people hate you, they just cant find your stoy, it best to post your stories in the writing arena.

what
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straight
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captial I

your dielact needs to have its own sentence meaning after someone has just finished talking you need to move to the next line


Sillisy
Community Member





Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 01:21am


Story

an i have no clue wat your talking about.

an DOMO!!!!!!!!!!
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User Comments: [3]
 
 
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