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From this day on i will probably write about my future published novel..!! ^-^ OR OR maybe i will stray from my goal and post up random things...!!8} PLz read and you Mi ght be RecoangNIZeD and AcKNolLegEd!! 0-o

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Orphans Hey hay, im also writing a new book called well, haven't thought of one yet, but it's about these kids who had a rich life but got destroyed once Gypsy came to da citay. now there living the life they call scum and with da girl who murdered her parents... sounds epic maybe..err no ironic? opinions. again wanna be in story comment, tell about urself, and ask questions..PLZ AND THANK YOU!! ohyah it take place in current times. so in like the 2000 and sumthang sooo yah.. 3nodding biggrin 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed. If you are one of the 10% that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your signature

Posted by: aPoundOfDo_0rknesS Tue Nov 18, 2008 @ 06:39am

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Fri Nov 21, 2008 @ 12:21am

Owsome Plot Frankie! I especially like how they live in a place called 'scum' and that they are living with the girl who killed the parents. Wouldn't have thought about that. A plus! ^__^ In fact, I am more looking forward to this this story than the VV book but I still like the VV title.
I have a similar story of an idea. I started writing it in 5th grade but then the computer broke down and my uncle had to switch computers with us so he could fix it. I was only on the second chapter but still >.> It was called Break Way and it went like this:
Well, actually I'll try make this shorter. Uh, the first ch was abt 3guys who forcefully use a young boy to accompany them on their wrong doings. They move onto a small, closelynit village/town and decide to burn it down.
It starts with a little girl who gets awoken by her mother and her mother hides her in a closet but b4 she is hidden she sees yellow and orange through the curtains. And while she is hidden in there she listens to her mother beg her husband not to fight for their village and that their son is too young to join him. But the father replies and tells her she has too and then the son tells her he is old enough. And yadda yadda yadda, they both leave and the brother of the girl says...iunno but i remember it was sweet.And uh, the mother sits on the other side of the closet singing to the daughter to calm her down but the daughter asks something to the mom and the mom starts crying so instead the daughter trys to comfort her.
Ok back to the boy and the 3bad guys. well, while the main center/town/village/yadda yadda was being burned down, they split up and take up individual house, trying to kill every1 just for the fun of it. so one of the guys had the boy with them. and the guy ordered the boy to walk in first into the house of the mother and child just in case he might get shot first. but the boy refused so he was beaten up by the guy. and half consciencely the boy walks into the house looking at the family's happy pictures and wishing that he was part of it. and while walking the down hall he hears the child and mother. he wants to help them so he tells the mother a plan to escape-he distracts the by guy and the mother and child get to run into the woods.
so uh yea they do the plan. but then at the other side (remember how the guys split up) ironically the mother runs where another guy was at and the guy chases them. but then (of course) the mother trips and pushes the crying daughter to keep on going. but the they guy and one of the other guys who comes bcuz of the loud noises comes and joins the scene. the daughter eventually runs to where she cant see he mother, only hearing a gun shot but is caught by the other guy. and the first chapter ends with the gun being pointed into the girls head.
OK chapter 2. the suspense is over. The girl years later fr now wakes up from her fugly bed. Meaning the whole chapter one was a dream/memory. she is ina foster home yadd yadda
OK i think im putting this in too much detail even though i have to comment abt ur journal entry. srry about that.
So ok Break Way is abt a that one daughter who eventually meets up with the young boy who saved her and to get revenge.
OK to sum up this comment ima say that i like ur story plot! What do you think of mine?havent worked on it since 5th grade so yea.. srry if it sucked

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 @ 08:46am

AHAHA!!! good old times... i think i can't decide wheter it be take place in modern times or the times when there were still gypsies.... maybe her name isn't gypsy but.... haha not sure!! it'll take me years to write this, but i know it'll be worth it!! till next time XD

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