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Life leasons!!!!
My boyfriend problem...and anything else. Oh ya and my poetry
[The sight of you I see even when your not with me

I lie on the ground
and stare into space
The stars begin to take the shape
The shape of your face
I see you there now
Looking down upon me
with your smile
That I love to see
You say "close your eyes and tell me what you see"
I see just two people
Thats you and me
We walk a shoreline
With the waves on our feet
The horizon is pink
As the sun starts to set
There we make love all night long
Upon that white sandy shore
As we hold all I can think of
Is oh how I want nothing more
Oh I wish it could be
Just you and me in that special place
But all I can do
Is lie on the ground
and stare into space






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Derek Schell
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 24, 2008 @ 12:50am
I like this one. It has a true meaning of love. You really are a good poet. You should continue to write. =]


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 24, 2008 @ 01:35am
i like it, its really good ^_^



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