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WW: Wrong War
By Dominick Cortes

Ever since the stand of man
There has been a fight.
Whether by stones or guns
There has been un-needed violence

Propaganda tells the story of "home saftey"
But in reality, young men march ontop of their own graves.
A war speaks of peace in the end
But black clouds surround the false of an end.

Many believe the lie which we fight for,
The justification of innocent blood spilled
For oil, For money, For land
And so they say "For the land of the free."

The reality of the matter is we all lose
Lose the oil, Lose the money
And when his hat comes back without an head
Is the saddest story beside the lose of resources

The endless wheel moves on as we continue to die,
Wars never end where they should have expired
And the flag will wave with its scars
For the supposed "Home of the brave."






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bobobo nation
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 02, 2009 @ 04:22am
this is so amazing!
i love how you talked about the oil and the things we supposedly fight for,it's a very deep poem
i love it!
i think i like this one the best so far
you have to become a writer!


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 02, 2009 @ 04:27am
other than a few grammatical errors...i find it to me a refreshing outlook on an underused topic
plus i dont want to be gutted alive xD



iClash-x
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MTbrainz XD
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 02, 2009 @ 11:30am
oh my jesus dom ur amazing! id like to say more but my bus will be here in 2 min >.<; BE A WRITER!


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 12, 2009 @ 09:06pm
surprised wow...thats all i have to say, and yes that is a good thing 3nodding



ll Kyoya_Okamiyasha ll
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SkyPersona
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 19, 2009 @ 07:11am
lol Kinda running low on things to say...which is not normal stare and you know it but you know once again great poem xD


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