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I made a song.... as you can see it's a working progress Came out with my hands up, screamin' . . .. . . .. Fighting all of my inner demons .. . . .. .. Why you gotta bring me down . . .. . . . This can't be my fight now . ... . . The deciscion rests in your own hands, If I may, have another life span..? Spare me please, it wasnt my fault, Because of you im locked in this vault. You gave me no time to think, My thoughts? They're starting to sink. Down into the black abyss, Oh, all the things im going to miss. Help me escape from this place, Only thing I need is to see your pretty face. Please don't let me go, Why do you treat me as your foe?

Posted by: Tainted_Symphonies Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 06:19pm

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:21pm


	Came out with my hands up, screamin' . . .. . . .. Fighting all of my inner demons .. . . .. .. Why you gotta bring me down . . .. . . . This isn't my fight now . ... . . had no time to turn around i am unstoppable now whyd you drag me into this? i just cant handle it

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:23pm


	oh i like! its going to be added!

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:25pm


	AWESHUMM!~ Ill think of more.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:26pm


	okay!! ;D

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:28pm


	Came out with my hands up, screamin', Fighting all of my inner demons. Why you gotta bring me down? This isn't my fight now... Had no time to turn around; I am unstoppable now. Why'd you drag me into this? I just cant handle it... You gave me no time to think, My thoughts? They're starting to sink. Down into the black abyss, Oh, all the things im going to miss. and nao there needs to be a hook.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:29pm


	yes a hook i needed and maybe a chorus i think we need a better word than now in the 2nd stanza... it sounds kinda weird

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:35pm


	yeah. maybe a whole nother part. because the way im thinking of the song, that just doesnt belong... Uhh. Came out with my hands up, screamin' Fighting all of my inner demons Why you gotta bring me down This isn't my fight now The deciscion [sp?dc] rests in your hands, If I may, have another life span..? Spare me please, it wasnt my fault, Because of you im locked in this vault. I had no time to think, And all my thoughts? They're starting to sink. Down into the black abyss, Oh, all the things i am going to miss. and then the hook. i think that sounds better.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:38pm


	yes I like that better And this doesn't have to start out the song... It just came to me and I wanted to write it down before it was lost.

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:40pm


	yesh of course. btw i edited the one that i just posted. sorreh.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:42pm


	okay ^^ ummm now a hook...i need to look up what that is because i forgot lol

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:49pm


	its the main part of the song. like in a little piece of heaven, the 'cause you had my heart at least for the most part' yeah, thats the hook LOL.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:50pm


	yeah i just looked it up and it said it's what was important to a song's commercialing what made it famous

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 09:59pm


	better think of something catchy then... :/ LOL BTW. i like what you added, slightly too many words, well thats what i think.

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 10:00pm


	Help me escape from this place, Only thing I need is to see your pretty face. Please don't let me go, Why do you treat me as your foe? okay well maybe there werent just the right words. fer me, if thats the hook, then theres my edit.

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 10:03pm


	yeah i thought the same I like your edit! STUPID ONIONS MAKING ME SNEEZE!

Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 10:06pm


	sneeze...? i only cry sometimes. LOL except for the red ones, those dont do anything. LOL

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 10:09pm


	yeah usually they make me cry but they were making me sneeze it was weird

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