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Last Good Bye
He laid down on the ground

With all his friends around

There was nothing left

He was ready for his last rest.

His friends had been crying

When they found out he was dying

His only love looked away

There was nothing to say

He looked up and watched the sky

Watching the clouds passing by

His blood came from his hand wrist where he had cut with a knife

He didn't wanted to live in this life

He laid on the grass with the face against the sky

This is his last goodbye






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Quackish
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 06, 2009 @ 11:03am
Du borde göra en låt av den här, skulle bli as bra x3


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 11, 2009 @ 08:14pm
that was wounderful...or how ever u spell it i just love but i love all ur poems u make i still reamber tears of blood heart ur da best bro



wolf kagome16
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 14, 2009 @ 12:58pm
Well.. It's very good, Jimmey. ^ ^
And 'bout ya status... People isn't paying any time at read the journals anymore....
I am writing one too.... And nobody reads it. >XD
Or few does.... Mostly strangers... But I never gets comments XDD

Well... Keep up the good work with ya poems :3


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