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all u need to know is im very confusing
distained blood
devine lust
hearts ache and loves disgust
pain of sorrow and heart misplaced
u seach for a place for it to play
for in the ache u feel the pain
as it severs the love u once knew it seems
as if a old pain to u
u know it well and feel it often
ure heart forgotten the love it had gotten
more then pain and more then ache
ure heart sees the happy place
but around ure heart there beats a aura and black remnese or heartbreaks torn off ya
null and void the concept of love leaves scar after scar in the hearts own blood
bleed it dry in every sence the love the passion and invigourous intense
see how u loved see how u did rejoice in the fact u can love once again
in minds own heart and the void in ure chest remind u of love ones that u let away
kick at the darkness till it bleeds daylight and love the things that u help to have strife

diffrent mood

lips like the sun that warms my heart
the tempting curves that make my heart dart
the heart of passion seeing in there
as normal as day as normal as night
u give me ure love with my much delivered delight
eyes of bliss oh holy bliss
imbodyment of love
ure words like kiss
when i c u my heart does race
i try to act fine but in every wish
i seek ure heart to be with mine
i stray around it but never to find
that i was a fool u were always mine
we shall be one with the heart and the love
as love becomes stronger so does ure heart and when i am with u my heart does grow
never alone i feel u with even when far and away without miss

~pride aka steve!~






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x_Twiinkle S T A R
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 02:17am
Very good..lol the other night I started a poem and by the time it was done it was a wannabe rap...anways I liked the second one better. mrgreen


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 02:24am
heart heart Beautiful Stevie



Geisha Cookie
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neko_areku
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 27, 2006 @ 03:47am
kawaiii blaugh


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 01, 2006 @ 08:10am
watz up man nice poem very god i like it sooooo.......u must really like this i can see by the poem lol rofl rofl rofl lol wat im i talking about.....if u really like go ask her out wat is this y im i talking like that aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh stressed stressed *punch my face* rofl



3WiL
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