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To Be Different This poem comes from a program i recently finished watching called Fruits Basket thanks to this series i have been given the inspiration to write poetry again after a year... a special thanks to assassin of demise for telling me about this series What im about to write comes from my heart and is what i feel so i will appreciate your comments thank you heart Suki heart I know what its like to be told you dont belong I know how Kyo felt being told he is wrong To be told you are nothing time and again To be all alone with not even a friend I wish i was there to tell him i know To not be afraid and to never leave home To be shown your a freak an insignificant being I wish i could tell him all my true feelings I want to show that i can care I want to prove that i can be there Its hard when your different for no one to understand I want to say i love you for you and take him by the hand So now im not afraid of being past normal I wont break it down i wont make it formal I Love you Kyo cause your just like me And once we accept it our lives will be free

Posted by: sukinamae Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 08:33pm

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Vixze Isimaki
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Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 08:45pm


	claps That was an awesome poem! ^^

Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 08:51pm


	wow.............that was better than all of the hundred poem my language teacher recited to us!Its better than any poem i ever made too! I really am speechless........it was wonderful

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Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 09:00pm


	thanks guys

Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 09:11pm


	aww it's cute...I likie alot! 3nodding

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Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 09:21pm


	It is very nice, you might wont to break the first portion into two parts for estetic resons or make the two parts one.

Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 10:30pm


	ahhhhh that poem was so good crying but i think that you're gonna dump me for the anime charecter nuuuuuuuu if kyo tries to take you away from me i'll slay him rawwrr steps in front of rei with a huge six foot at least sword o_O

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Commented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 10:31pm


	Wow I am speechless that was a very good peom your amazing

Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 12:53am


	That was awe inspiring. It's been a while since I've read a poem that good. Good job.

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:46am


	--starts drooling-- that's good

Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 02:24pm


	that was cool it was awsome blaugh 3nodding

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Commented on: Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 03:30pm


	claps Very nice, I wish I could right poems like that, sadly I'm not that creative, well done though!!

Commented on: Sun Feb 05, 2006 @ 02:59am


	Claps Bravo, very good! biggrin

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Commented on: Thu Feb 09, 2006 @ 11:57am


	Your thought and the way you show your emotions is truely beautiful ^^

Commented on: Wed Feb 22, 2006 @ 09:33am


	Indeed darling this poem is very inspiring. Though i write poetry it is personal. I like it very much, so basic yet so much depth. Words, which explain a million feelings, a thousand pictures, a hundred truths. - Bows taking her hand and kissing it gently..- I pass to you a kiss, in which is the only way i can explain the beauty of your poetry.

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Commented on: Fri Feb 24, 2006 @ 06:07am


	Poetry can show peoples true sides and yours is very becoming

Commented on: Tue Feb 28, 2006 @ 06:09pm


	Blushes as her hand is kissed Thank you when the mood takes me i will write again Thanks for all your comments guys i really do appreciate it

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Commented on: Sat Apr 15, 2006 @ 02:23pm


	Very well written I don't write I draw my expressions. Well done

Commented on: Mon May 29, 2006 @ 02:08pm


	Where there is light, there is shadow, But the shadow cannot shine, So the shadow lives, fight, and dies in darkness, so the light can continue to shine, This is the fate of the shadow. The beauty of this poem is the light, The hatred in my in the shadow. Bows, touching his forehead to the floor I bow to the master of the words, may you life be filled with everything opposite of mine.

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Commented on: Fri Jun 09, 2006 @ 07:56pm


	Very nice. Poetry does bring out the inner person inside you. Your person sounds like a caring person. Alone but loves friends. Its good you put yourself in what you do. When you put a little bit of yourself into something its there forever.

Commented on: Sat Jul 15, 2006 @ 01:02am


	"Kallima Inachus" She flutters, among many brethren. She shudders, allowing herself to be shoved back. They refuse to look at her, pushing roughly past. For though she wishes she were, she is not the same. They all have wings of beauty and color, while hers are only grey. She is the embodiment of squalor, flying among jewels of rarity. Poor dear, I'm afraid she can not see. The others don't shove past to harm, But truly they do flee. For that one among them, She whose wings are grey, Can not see her own back, and the colors that there lay. Her difference, which she feels shame about. Is truly an extravagance, the others run from in envy. "What does it become, when the snow melts..."

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