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Changeing
Military, Change, Future, Past, Transformation
Chapter 2
The Briefing


I woke up the morning of the mission day and wondered if the dream was real. "The dream was oh so real, what will happen today". I got dressed and went to the briefing room and there sat the general. A tall black man in his fourtys with a strong muscle toned appearence. The generals real name was Deshawn, he had not told anyone but me. He was my drill sergeant when i was a small wimpy recruit. I have grown strong since those days. Deshawn has always put fear and respect into my eyes after what happened. One day during training, we were infiltrated by some insurgents. Deshawn and I were the only ones willing to fight I got a purple heart but he got a promotion to general one of the highest states of the military, but, when we were fighting one of them pinned me to the floor and he saved me and took all the rest out while saying "Ahah get some, get some". After that day i have been very respectful and when I heard he would be my general I was in a state of shock and awe. "Sit down Anthony, i believe we have some briefing to do about your mission now dont we" "YES SIR!!!" "Ok as I believe the urban home your squad will be infiltrating is a insurgent mad house. You and your squad will need great caution, there will be snipers in the top roof on the balconey, and gaurd dogs locked up somewhere. Do not, I repeat do not kill those dogs. They were expiramenting on them, we need to knock them out and bring them back here for testing any other important things you find, bring them back here, you got that!" "YES SIR!!!" "Ok then i believe you have a mission to be on, go!" I stayed behind to talk to the general because I did not believe that we could do it alone. So I asked him to join us in our mission. He explained that he had a highly important meeting and said that I would be just fine, especially after how well he taught me. "Go suit up sergant" "YES SIR!!!"

Chapter 3 out today-tomorrow





JSR Da Beat
Community Member
  • 01/03/10 to 12/27/09 (7)

  • User Comments: [2]
    x_lHoLLoWl_x
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    Thu Dec 31, 2009 @ 04:12am


    Its good but theres something I dont understand... In chapter one you used 3rd peron but now you are using 1st.Is this you or a character named after you?


    JSR Da Beat
    Community Member





    Thu Dec 31, 2009 @ 04:14am


    i was narrating for the first part and now it switch to the character you see how cant you understand that how can you have a interesting narrative? I never heard of one but thanks


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