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The rain is here and there, it comes and goes and it falls and flows. It's the same with life and the way some people think. You can hear the rain pattering and it's just so peaceful.....
Once upon a time,
there were endless rhymes,
with meter and charm,
with balance and charge.
Have people grown to lazy,
their vision hazy,
for they come up with simple rhymes,
such as cat and hat, definitely crimes.
Has their creativity gone ragid?
their vitality gone acrid?
clearly our generation
needs some inspiration.






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Mikha90
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 23, 2011 @ 01:51am
A hit right on the spot,
with force and whatnot.
The view on poetry.
Our past and our fantasy
Our creativity
Without a doubt dying
Stories we heard as children
Never to be compared
And never will be as much as remembered
In our society
We don't create but copy
With changes and old ideas
We think we make something new and unique
But do nothing but mass producing.


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