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my sad attempt at writing a sonnet for english class. enjoy (i hope)

You should know that I know you are depressed,
But suicide is not the right answer.
You should not feel that you are being pressed,
Because you're not just spread your wings and soar.

You repeatedly try to hurt yourself
You think you're ready to leave this world.
I'm sure there's a knife sitting on your shelf,
But couldn't you just look beyond the door.

I know you think that I'm suicidal,
Because I try to help you with these poems.
I hope you know you shouldn't take your toll,
Unless you realize you may not be home.

If you ever need to talk just come see
I will always be there just don't leave me.





Agateophobic
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    Liechtensteinerin
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    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 10, 2006 @ 06:32am
    why so many poems about suicide? it's good, though.


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