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The Prince's Diary
A Short Story/Poem
Okay. Before I start, I must let you know.... I am soo not a good poet. sweatdrop so yeah. Especially in free verse... Man I suck. To me, it came out more as a short story so If it seems like a short story to you, consider it a short story. If you consider it a poem (which I highly doubt.) consider it a poem. So, here we go....



Winter's soft frozen rain fell gently against the cold hard ground.
We lay on the ground making images of angels while different flakes are falling from above.
Pure white is in every direction, covering all beautiful landmarks while making them even more glorious.
Standing still, watching the trees not moving letting themselves get covered with snow. I forget I'm exactly like them.
Letting myself be covered with white.
My skin is now cold.
I'm shivering on the outside, but inside, I feel elated and warm.
I could be out here all day.
Cold and warm at the same time.
But as long as you're here with me...
I could stand here forever.






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PhantomTheif Jacob
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 30, 2006 @ 01:24am
Wow....thats good


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 04, 2009 @ 08:13am
Wow Im reading this years later and wow I love it. Its really good. Only good poetry touches my heart like that. *lame cliche I know* Your a good poet.



xDarkBlossomx
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