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The Warrior within
its just a story I made with me and some friends in it.
when we last left off Tori and Nick were just about to learn what there animals were.

"Ok your animals are for Tori a fox and a squirel." said Sun-tan. "well that would explain the fox ears but why a squuirel? asked Tori. "your ques will be in answered in time young one" said Sun-tan wisey. "ok mine next mine next!" said Nick excited. "ah yes Nick, your nimals are the hummingbird and the eagle." sun-tan said. "YAY IM A BIRIE" screamed nick as he flapped his arms like wings. Sun-tan worked with Tori and Nick intil sunset. "my friends time is running short and there is still more I need to teach you." said Sun-tan. "the last thing I need to teach you for now is how to transform into your animals. all you need to do is picture the animal of your chose and you should soon transform." Sun-tan said. Then Tori Said "Ok Ill go first." So she pictured the fox in her head as best as she could. She closed her eyes but nothing happened. Then Tori felt heat around her legs so she opeaned her eyes in surprise and shock. Her fire powers started to surrond her, spining in a clock-wise spin around her legs moving upward to speedly engulf her in a firey tomb. Tori shut in eyes and pictured the fox again hoping it would let her forget about what was happening around her. When she opened her eyes she could smell, hear and see alot better then before. Tori looked up and saw Nick petting her. He said "awwww Tori your so cute and fuzzy!" "stop petting me Im a human not an animal" screamed Tori. Nick said"umm tor your a fox." Tori looked down and saw paws instead of hands and a tail. "it worked, it really worked!" screamed tori in exciment. "ok Im next" said Nick looking serious for once. Nick shut his eyes and pictured the eagle. Soon Nick just like tori opened his eyes and saw a big fluffy white cloud engulfing his head and everything went black. When he opened his eyes he looked around. Everything was in black and white. Nick's arms were gone and replaced by wings. "cool Im a bird" chripped Nick. "I would hate to spoil your fun but i must goI can not be out while the sun is gone. If you need me, I will apper on the hoest day of each month and my wife Moontan appers every full moon. " Sun-tan said. At that time he faded away with the sun. Then Tori and Nick relized they were still animals! Tori and Nick didnt know what to do. But in the distance they saw a forest at the end of the desert. So the animal friends walked and flew tarwards the forest to take shelter for the long night.

Will Tori and Nick ever become human again? Whats Suki and Kuroi doing?
to be continued...






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[ Burnt Out Toaster ]
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 04, 2006 @ 12:50am
I LOVED IT!!!!!! heart


commentCommented on: Wed Oct 04, 2006 @ 02:06am
NICE!!! Im a fox! Sweet! mrgreen Keep writing everyone loves your stories. mrgreen



Queen of Black Hearts
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neoistheone21
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 04, 2006 @ 11:23am
Wow Shannon that was a really good chapter you have there. It was really interesting. lol I can see why everybody wants to be in your stories so badly.


commentCommented on: Wed Oct 04, 2006 @ 09:22pm
*giggles* thanks everyone for commenting and being so nice heart



Lonely_Hunter
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