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	The Dark Days Of My Life An Evil Journal of stuff I can be bothered to write about. ~~Plz leave a comment on them and make my day slightly brighter~~

	Poem #2
	Poem #2


I look through distant eyes wondering were to turn. No one would look at me, they all seemed to look through me. It was hard thought, to always be ignored. It got easy though. Through the hard times, and the sad, and the beaten days of old. Runing through the forest, trying to escape it. it follows me, and it hunts me. I try to run but it's inside of me. Preying tearing hungering and always always dying one the inside so slowly... so very slowly... Layalas · Fri Oct 20, 2006 @ 05:00pm · 9 Comments


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	User Comments: [9]
	User Comments: [9]


	sweatdrop Is that even a poem? I was trying to suss how you make a poem that has no rhythm or rythme. Any comments? Offline Layalas · Community Member · Fri Oct 20, 2006 @ 05:01pm


	its good!!! and poems dont have to rhyme or have a rhythm if they are freeverse Offline Nemos Star · Community Member · Sun Oct 22, 2006 @ 02:34pm


	how do u comment on ur own journal? i cant find the button 2 click... Offline Nemos Star · Community Member · Tue Oct 24, 2006 @ 05:35pm


	I repond to your poem, with a rhyme of my own I say good chap doth hand me a scone An english accent i out on to see the results of confused and scorn I am making this up after my tea to avoid doing HW for GCSE I cant think of anything else so urm...... something ryming with else Offline Shadow040 · Community Member · Wed Nov 15, 2006 @ 09:43pm


	hey layalas, you got owned by a non rhyming poem, running, Pfft! xd Offline Shadow040 · Community Member · Wed Nov 15, 2006 @ 09:45pm


	lol thats kinda funny xd Offline Nemos Star · Community Member · Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 08:50pm


	I didn't get owned ~ good poem reply though Shadow! Offline Layalas · Community Member · Fri Nov 24, 2006 @ 05:47pm


	ur poem did own you! Offline Shadow040 · Community Member · Sat Dec 16, 2006 @ 07:22pm


	OMG! I just figured out the next few lines! I stop to catch my breath and "Tag, you're it!" Offline Shadow040 · Community Member · Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 09:01pm

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"emotions turning back onto themselves
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is the element of madness."
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