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kotomi--mitsu
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Recollections of a Snake
I was a viper and he was the mouse.
I struck at him but he took the house.
Viciously and raucously, we tangoed 'til four
when a tremendous knock came to the door
and instantly ceased my fast-growing progress
so, with disappointment, I did digress.

We separated.

For a short while, I retired
and he, hidden, he perspired
as I kept watch from my place
with none but intention of dining with grace.
I sought to create in the mouse such a haze
as to not implore my venomous ways.

I succeeded.

Soon, very soon a friendship grew.
One-sided, but my cohort never knew.
Quickly and rapidly we would play--
enjoying that beautiful carnival all the day.
We spun and swam and danced and rested
'til the mouse saw time he had invested.

He left.

It had grown late, and soon was dark.
By this time, I was as ravenous as a shark.
My dear, sweet friend soon returned to me
from his majestic embassy.
I inquired of another game to exact
But, by-and-by, he would not react.

He had fainted.

Given the circumstance, I took much haste
In giving myself a sweet little taste.
So delicious! And what a nice dinner.
But, oh!, perfect for the winner
of a gallant and noble fight.
Struck down once, yet victor of the night.






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Tanya_the_elf
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comment Commented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 01:01am
I like the way you talked about the hunt... as a dance. Very...poetic. I fail at talking about poetry, today of all days, but I do like it.


comment Commented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 01:08am
Snakes always seem to dance before a strike.
And I thought you might like it.
Seeing as your interests and the like.
<3

I'm sorry about your day and hope things will improve shortly.
Thank you for the comment.
C:



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Kinsho
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comment Commented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 01:16am
<3
Ssssssss! "I'm a snake!" Ssssss! <3


comment Commented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 01:18am
"I'm gonna bite you. Sssssss. I'ma snake. Sssssss."
I wonder if they still remember it.

Josh thought it was funny.
xD;

*crawlz around*



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Pyrosco
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comment Commented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 06:31pm
Wow that's very nice. heart


comment Commented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 12:07am
Thank you very much! <3



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Zeh Rickster
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comment Commented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 10:34pm
Zeh Rickster DESPISES exams >____<

D: the poor mouse
a great poem though ^_^


comment Commented on: Thu Jan 18, 2007 @ 02:13am
Beat themz exams up!
O:<

Thank you!
My mom was upset about the mouse, too.
She said "I felt such a connection with him...".
xD



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