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My Journal Named...Bum...Bum...BUM!!!...bob!!! : D
what i see is real........or at least real to me.......i didn't think they would hurt me.....but they did......they could have killed me.....all i did was ask them who they were and what they wanted with me and they lost it.......now all i know is that they are ghosts who haught me.....only me....why me??...what did i do to desurve this??......
Those were the last words of Sally before she was put in the "safe house" or at least that's what the doctors called it. She was recording herself every time she saw these "ghosts". And her mother found these recordings in her room under her bed in a black box with blood on it and she turned her dear Sally into the hands of the doctors...........

Sally is in her room, which is a light blue but some of the paint begane to peel off to show black through, she is staring at a corner crying lightly wispering "it's all your fault we wouldn't be here if u would have just left me alone". The doctors are watching her with there cameras placed in the room for "protection", or at least that's what they told her mother..........

"i don't see why you couldn't just leave me alone, or at least not hurt me, now everyone thinks i'm crazy when i'm not ur real i know it ur ghost or demons or something idk but i'm not crazy" Sally whispers into the corner to her "friend" the girl who has told her her name is lisa. (lisa is a young girl who dies when her grandmother puts her in the road and someone hits her)

Lisa speaks "yeah well it's not my fault if the doctor wouldn't have hurt her no one would have ever thought that u were crazy, and sides the reason u see me and others don't is because no one has an open mind like you do, and ur not the only one children can see me too but ur mind is open like a childs so that's why u see me and i do haught other people they just don't notice" (the doctor is another one of her friends who is a doctor who has this big needle and tries to hurt others with it he died by being stabbed in the head with he's own needle by his cheating wife when he found her with another man)

Sally looks at the ceiling and a pool of blood begans to poor through and she sees her friend charlie fall with the blood.......






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FrEaKwHoLoOkSwEiRd
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 08:49pm
this is the start of a story i am writing only reason it's here is because my comp was about to die on me and i would have lost my info if i didn't save it so yeah.........


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 09:35pm
I like it so far............



Akishiana
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Michi Uzumaki
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 11:52pm
yeah me too, but i got a little nervous there for a second afyter readin fords entry ^^;;;; lol sorry


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 02:32am
oh yeah fords was....um....idk



FrEaKwHoLoOkSwEiRd
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Bandit of Love
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 03:37am
Interesting, it doesn't scare me I'm just not used to you writnig stories. ^_^ So its a nice change, even if its a scary story.


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 07:40pm
yea, same what holly said.....though i did pee a little



FordCorleone
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FrEaKwHoLoOkSwEiRd
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 07:40pm
it's not really ment to be that scary it's just ment to be a story of a girl fighting for her sanity it needs a lot of work cause this was just random typeing i haven't fixed it in anyway yet


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 10:14pm
Ooooooooooo!!!! Its so good!!!!



Akishiana
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