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Gloomy Melody


This gloomy melody I hear
Makes me think of all the sad things in my life
It makes me want to shed to tears
For I may not get a to be with you again

I give and I give and get nothing back out
This gloomy melody makes me want to pout
It hurts when no one can tell you're sad
It hurts even more when they are people you love
It hurts that you can't tell anyone how sad you are
The sadness consumes you and overwhelmes you
This is the gloomy melody I hear



It's unfinished hopefully i'll finish it soon






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inu_angel_x
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 12:32am
pfft you are a good poet. least better than me...

aww what happened? are you emo?? =O


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 07, 2007 @ 01:14am
Wow! You're a good poet...



Tushy Lynn
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frrobin
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 06:38am
Its sad and makes me sad but its a great poem 3nodding neutral


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 01:18pm
Nice 3nodding



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Ms.Oreo
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 25, 2007 @ 08:52am
Wow! Didn't know you wrote poetry. It's good though, sad too. You should finish it. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 04:32am
a poem...



Celi Beli
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