Well i have had an urge to enter some of my poetry on here and get constructive comments only please
ths is the first serious poem i wrote a year or so ago:
Loves End
My heart an open casket
Stiff as a board
Numb as ice
I've loved once twice
Three times too many
Each end with heartbreak
And regrets
My eyes open to pain
Never seen by child’s eyes
My heart my soul shredded to pieces
Yet I go on I love again
Make mistakes and my heart
Patched together falls apart
All the easier
As the darkness falls
You know pain
While I know only loneliness
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