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i feel like writing poetry this is one i wrote long time ago, well not so long but awhile. its lame and boring but still.... gray rain rain drops fall down, gray sky, gray town, gray me, gray you, whole worlds gray too. no love, no hate, we say thats great. no one is mean. not that are seen. no one feels bad, no one is sad. rain still falls down, on this still town. some one wakes up. pours out a cup of something sweet. and starts to eat. something is wrong, awake and strong. her brains not weak, thinking all week. rain coming down on this gray town. they're like sheep, the people asleep. comes up with plan. to see if she can make it alright turns up the light. and looks around. listens for sound rain falling down to wake this town. comment, tell me if its any good.

Posted by: filia maris Mon Apr 30, 2007 @ 01:30am

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Commented on: Mon Apr 30, 2007 @ 02:56pm


	shiny!!! i really love your poetry. are you gonna turn in your notebook of it for extra credit?

Commented on: Tue May 01, 2007 @ 05:22am


	not the notebook, but i'll type some of it up. i really dont think its that good though.

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Commented on: Tue May 01, 2007 @ 02:35pm

Commented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 05:16am


	really? you mean it? heart thanx i feel good now. even if you are just saying it.

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Commented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 07:19am


	Yo listen up here's a story About a little guy that lives in a blue world And all day and all night and everything he sees Is just blue like him inside and outside Blue his house with a blue little window And a blue corvette And everything is blue for him and his self And everybody around 'Cause he ain't got nobody to listen.. I have a blue house with a blue window Blue is the color of all that I wear Blue are the streets and all the trees are too I have a girlfriend and she is so blue Blue are the people here that walk around Blue like my corvette, it's standing outside Blue are the words I say and what I think Blue are the feelings that live inside me i love this song. and about poetry, my poet phase was pre blanchet. no masterpieces are known to remain. and my art phase is gone to. the dragons, the warships, the warriors. all my colors fade away, all my colors fade to gray.

Commented on: Thu May 03, 2007 @ 11:48pm


	now i feel sad. but my stuff is still crap.

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Commented on: Fri May 04, 2007 @ 02:11am


	not necessarily. and i dont think anyone reads mine anymore. and that song was awesome but it was also a suicide note. full lyrics: I'm blue, da ba dee da ba die (x7)(x2) I have a blue house with a blue window. Blue is the color of all that I wear. Blue are the streets and all the trees are too. I have a girlfriend and she is so blue. Blue are the people here that walk around, Blue like my Corvette, it's standing outside. Blue are the words I say and what I think. Blue are the feelings that live inside me. I'm blue, da ba dee da ba die (x7)(x2) I have a blue house with a blue window. Blue is the color of all that I wear. Blue are the streets and all the trees are too. I have a girlfriend and she is so blue. Blue are the people here that walk around, Blue like my Corvette, it's standing outside. Blue are the words I say and what I think. Blue are the feelings that live inside me. I'm blue, da ba dee da ba die If I were green I would die If I were green I would die If I were green I would die If I were green I would die If I were green I would die(x2)

Commented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 02:14am


	i like that, its sounds familiar. but my stuff still crap.

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