My Poem (I cant choose a name)

• Artist: Abby S16
• Description: A poem that i wrote. i've posted it on other sites too. it was chosen as best answer to a question on Yahoo! Answers
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: poem cant choose name

We get so far in this life,
and though we go through so much strife,
we make it through the rough and narrow,
coming out like the most beautiful sparrow.
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sorry i havent chosen a name yet!!! lol xd

Comments

[Abby S16]

ty biggrin Ya the end was kinda hard XD but, at least it matches the poem a little razz

[mia4150]

idk why i would name it away great poem btw
Away...

[Tokugawa Tsugumi]

good, the end is a bit cliche though