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Why is my heart so weak as to fall apart at any given chance..

I am so fragile that even the simplest yet meaningful words can undue my joy..


Is this even logical to have such strain upon ones mind that it curses all of that beings body down to the very fiber..

Caring and loving is it a chemical that can break down your whole system with a face,a memory..

Hesitant one might be yet,that accursed organ beats stronger only to come undone

Where is that strength that many healthy hearts have,is there a cure for a dismembered heart...

You can lose blood yet it restores,if the tissue is penetrated it heals,but the heart,the elite of all those...can easily be broken..

Yes,the mighty fall but then who is the strongest then ...

The body may be in the prime of its glory,yet all dwells in the state of one's heart...





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  • User Comments: [1]
    Kayla-Kay Koala
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    Fri Apr 04, 2008 @ 02:36am


    It's hard to understand at first. Something just doesn't seem to flow right.
    But when I get to the part about "caring and loving...etc. until end" I start to see what you're talking about.
    Not sure if you realized but you have two thens in the last line and it sounds kind of like you forgot what you said.
    "but then who is the strongest" or "but who is the strongest then" would be better. personally, I like the first more.

    Help any?


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