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Scribbles man, I wrote some pretty angsty stuff when I was younger... Haha!


Kev-N007
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The difference between a good poem...and a corny one
A good love poem tells it like a story
It's not short and does not sound all corny
It's to tell the person it's to that the person who wrote it thinks they're awesome
And to sound alive and real
Not fake and dead like a possum
You see, I can't stand it when people are doing all this
All you got to do is think of the magic
Think of the kiss
Think of the warm embrace and the feeling you get
When you're palms are all sweaty and they feel all wet
Try to imagine what it's like to share your life with that person
Cuz life is like a show, and we're waiting for the call of the curtains
We're waiting for a show before the show
A taste of the magic before we know
And what we know changes in time
Believe me and keep that in mind
One day you feel like this
The next, you feel like that
But let's get back to the point of this
Let's get back to what you wanted to read
Bet you can't resist
The good poems are cool and rhyme
And they always have the perfect time.......ing
The bad ones SUCK
I know people say that there's no such thing..
But who really gives a....
Another thing about poems, my lads and lasses
It tells of a problem that life harrasses
Not really, but you can make it like that if you want
You can even make it to sound like a taunt
A way of intimidation if you ask me
Just do it yourself and you'll see
See the many ways that you can use the power of poetry
Hey, does anyone know of a word that rhymes with poetry?
Anyway, I hope you feel smarter by reading this
And not be intimidated by my coolness
Kay peeps, I'm outty
Be sure to make a comment about me...






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HollyDot
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Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 05:58pm


In short; the last lines made me lol.
But it's kinda cute... Sorta... In a weird way!
O.o;;


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