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better version of/ the angel above She hold these shattered tears, her hand cut, Bleeding red, an angel whispers, with broken wings. I am here to protect you, beacon your away from your disstress, heal your soul, gather thoes tears you weep, turn them into joy. I am your angel from above, as I look upond you, My arms held out toward you, as you float in serenity, Drifting away, into a deep trance. Rose pattles will fall, our spirite will be lifted, eye's like a cat, they will glicen. Holding your fragil soul, soon you will be as graceful as a swan. For thy will shine, coming out of your shadows, no longer hiding, wings will open, as the gats open to you.

Posted by: Ravens_Inner_Soul Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 11:56pm

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Commented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 12:07am


	That was great. I must say I like that version a tad more. It has more to it.

Commented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 01:16am


	lol I kinda figure you guys would lol I mean come on psssh who wouldn't..doom doom doom

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Commented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 01:20am


	lol Anyone who doesn't like it just isn't human!

Commented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 01:40am


	this poem was AMAZINGLY done and thats coming from another poem writer lol but i had to read this sentence twice "beacon your away from your disstress, " for somce reason i read "bacon your away from your disstress," lol but again great poem

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Commented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 04:34pm


	XD lol you got that right Bob lmao I did that too bosain when I was re reading my poem lol

Commented on: Tue Apr 24, 2007 @ 10:13pm

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Commented on: Wed Apr 25, 2007 @ 12:34am


	Bacon yummy defintaly Teds dinner

Commented on: Wed Apr 25, 2007 @ 02:26am


	who's ted and can i have his dinner

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