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sacrifice
Into you whisper,
holding your regrates,
Never letting go,
Into your illusion you went,
Sacrificing your life,
you took my heart,
Bringing it to shame,
My chest in anguished,
Crushed into a million pieces,
Blood drips from your eyes,
Soulless eyes,
piercing into the shadowy dark,
Your spirit lurks the murky night,
My pulse stopping,
rose peddles fall,
my tears kiss my face,
wind whisper gently,
Hoping a miracle will happen,
I site and watch the starts shine brightly,
Looking at the crystal blue water,
I see your face sparkle back,
My sorrow wipe you away,
leaving me in the dark.






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i love my girl Almedina
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commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 02:13am
OMG this poem is amazingly done good job i hope this didnt happen to u


commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 05:46pm
No it didn't smile I was just in one of thoes moods that I really badly wanted to write a new poem smile



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Elie101_forever
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commentCommented on: Mon May 07, 2007 @ 02:44pm
Wow Fred that was amazing. Your a talented writer, really. I write poetry too, and for some reason my poems always come out dark and depressing as well...


commentCommented on: Mon May 07, 2007 @ 09:26pm
thats cause your emo elie



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commentCommented on: Mon May 07, 2007 @ 09:41pm
thanx Bob

lol oh ya Thunder we are Emo little chirn yup you caught us WhAT WILL We ever DO!!! lol


commentCommented on: Tue May 08, 2007 @ 10:21pm
rofl



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commentCommented on: Wed May 09, 2007 @ 02:20am
blaugh well then lol


commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 01:23am
Am I emo? Or is it you that's the emo one? stare



Elie101_forever
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commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 02:45am
YA HERE THAT PIFF SHE CALLED U EMO eek


commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 04:07pm
NO thunder you got it alll wrong you callled us emo and I was being sarcastic lol dork



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commentCommented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 10:42pm
oh lol look a monster domokun


commentCommented on: Sat May 12, 2007 @ 12:27am
ok ok everybody stay calm and PANIC!!!!!!! RUN IN CIRCLES



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Elie101_forever
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commentCommented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 10:59pm
A monster? Oh.. *goes up to monster and puts hand out for hand shake* Pleasure to make your acquantince.


commentCommented on: Mon May 14, 2007 @ 09:30pm
oooooh piff if i sing like the skittles rabit can i have some skittles
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thndrbndr
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commentCommented on: Mon May 14, 2007 @ 11:36pm
YAY SKITTTLES FIR EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!


commentCommented on: Tue May 15, 2007 @ 07:21pm
*starts to rain skittles* WHOO-HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Elie101_forever
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