Mom

• Artist: Crimi_chan300
• Description: ......................... Tell me what you think.....................
  I don't think it's that great, but hey.... I like it :3
  
• Date: 12/24/2008
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I can barely remember
a time that you smiled
it was way back then
down the road awhile
my memory has faded
and yet you still remain
a fraction of what you were
multiplied by pain
your face it never shines
your laughter never shone
what happened to you mommy
this is not the you i know
we never used to fight
and I'd miss you when you were gone
and now that things have changed
I think I might've been wrong
All of these things
are probably my fault
but sometimes I feel
your putting me and my life on hault
I wish I didn't hate you
but it's something that is done
and hey it's what you wanted
look mommy you won.

Comments

[Mutandanstan]

Its sad, I love it and it saved me when I was about to go insane from all of the lovey dovey poems I was seeing, thank you. 5-5

[Crimi_chan300]

thank you guys :3 and yes it is true unfortunetly :/

[BrokenHarmony44]

omg if this is true im sorry, but 5-5 it was excelent

[Vampires Wews-]

Its really sad buht great 5/5