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Some stuff I decided to write?
This is what it promises.
More lame poetry
Love is akin to a flower in the heat of a summer bloom,
bright petals adrift a sea of liquid fragrance--
drowning in a bed of wilting buds--
lined by rows of waving blades, green as the envy
of those who remain less fortunate.

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The memories remind us
of the pleasantries
in which we've each indulged,
not unlike a lone skiff
adrift in a sea of icy rage.
Ephemeral spires of endless blue
lay waste to the little boat
and come warmer tides,
not a thing remains
but the placid waves,
and a fickle reflection
of empty pleasantries.



真秋:ちょっとむらむらしているんだけど。。。
美恵:マーシュー。止めて。

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izumikona
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 12:47am
cry Aw, it's so melancholic and bitter. That's one way to describe heartbreak... I especially liked the last stanza or poem. I wasn't sure if they were separate or together but they certainly compliment each other.


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 01:27am
i thought it was beautiful. it totally moved meh crying crying but i am just emo like that blaugh 3nodding whee



Meoster45
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lunarprincess27
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 10:48pm
i like your poems. very nice! ^_^


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 19, 2007 @ 08:02am
Very Nice Writing.



RiotxTori
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