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Some stuff I decided to write?
This is what it promises.
Another Poem for the road:
Pine Needles

Unexpectedly came to be,
the substance of our composure,
musty in the ages of recent past,
shed in the places
more easily forgotten in ideal.
Without hesitation,
delivered from premonition,
expectation, and resilient morality,
housed by obscurity and uncertain outcome:
Oblivion resides here.

Oh! I wish I could stay
in the more beautiful places,
easy to forget, and always overlooked.
I wish I could hold
with more stable hand
the dregs of these gentle days!






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D_D Laris
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 09:06pm
I must know your secret to writing such astounding literature.
I should have mine up tonight to send to you, or by tomorrow, hopefully.


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 11:16pm
I think for the most part, I just try to write about personal things from an impersonal perspective. That's the best way to write something that others can appreciate (Thank you T.S. Eliot). This is a highly personal poem, but I don't really like writing about myself blatantly-- so I try to disguise it. *laughs*



igashijin
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D_D Laris
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commentCommented on: Mon Sep 24, 2007 @ 07:43pm
Nods..You write about the experience's you have went through.
I write due to how I feel towards emotions, and people around me.
Is that correct?


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