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Some more poetry- lame or not? Not enough people care :P "Twice in the kingdom that heaven forgot Thrice in the halls of the body and thought Once in the torment of beauty abroad left in the darkness, abandoned to rot." ------------------------------------------- Time for some more poetry... "Dials" The hands of the clock caress every hour gingerly, meticulously, gently they glide Through every second, every spending moment while others are about, minding their fleeting days, it ticks, turns, spins, whirls ascends to the pinnacle of every hour, only to drop into the pit of every half. Winding back the moments, the seconds, the minutes, hours, years pass in mere drops of time, spent in envy and vindictive joy. Were I able to hold these moments, into what darker thoughts might I fall? Into what dripping puddle of oblivion would a less bittersweet fate loath to find itself? 真秋：ちょっとむらむらしているんだけど。。。美恵：マーシュー。止めて。

Posted by: igashijin Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 09:11am

真秋：ちょっとむらむらしているんだけど。。。
美恵：マーシュー。止めて。

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D_D Laris
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Commented on: Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 10:21pm


	Indeed. I can't deny your lovely poetry. "Dials." As it is seems to peak my interest a great deal. As once again this happens to tell a story, or a passage you had to overcome. The second part I like this a great deal. It reminds me of myself. I am not certain that it is the same as how you feel. It reminds me of the things I have done, and the darkness that has engulfed me. You hold onto precious moments cause they seem to be what you cherish the most. You keep onto them, for the fear of losing something dear. As the time grows and changes are made. You follow it. Such things you like to remember, that should never be forgotten as the clock moves time faster. That is my thoughts on this poem.

Commented on: Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 01:55am


	あれ？何これ？igashijinの新誌？＾＾ Sounds like you're torn between regret and the need to preserve the sacredness of a memory. For some writers, Misery is also Muse. You're not sad, are you?

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Commented on: Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 09:20am


	Izu, I think I'm kind of 寂しがりや。　笑 I'm always feeling nostalgic and melancholy about the past. But- I don't think I'm a particularly depressed person for the most part. I just get overly sentimental about things, which totally makes me inwardly a saaaad panda. lol

Commented on: Thu Aug 16, 2007 @ 01:50am


	Mie ka. heart heart heart lol (don't worry, I'm not laughing at you--it's the hearts) As long as you're young, there's always plenty of chances to find contentment. Don't be a sad panda, missing is for ol'jijis!

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Commented on: Fri Aug 17, 2007 @ 12:20am


	un, mie no koto kamo na. heart redface gonk scream ninja I think I need to get better at looking forward to new things. lol There's always some reason to live for-- even if I don't always see it.. in the end, it's good to know that at least I'm aware of this.

Commented on: Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 04:57am


	heart The first one I just fell in love with claps did you write it? PM me to let me know cause i'll prabaly forget to look back here ^-^;;

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Commented on: Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 10:53pm


	Gotta love random profile surfing. Anyway, you're poems are really good.. sweatdrop I do a little bit of poetry myself, though it's a bit crappy. Check it out if you wish. =]

Commented on: Sat Oct 18, 2008 @ 05:49pm


	Hehe. Random Profile Surfing is awesome. Your poetry is very good. I don't write poetry but I love to read em. Hehe, I know, random comment from a random person. sweatdrop

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Commented on: Sun Nov 30, 2008 @ 05:29am


	Wow , this is really spiffy ! And so is your awesome hair ;FD You look like the lead singer of three days grace <3 I like food.

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