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Lyke, so very repetative...yick. = Meh...meh...meh. Another overly repedative peice...and..once again it's because it's actually a song, not a poem. neutral I like to do that...I'm so repetative. gonk I don't know if you'll see the independant beat it has because it's lyrics and thus has it's own beat that might not be easily found..since...it's meant to be sung. I don't know how I feel about it over all, though I like the end. Once again, I got happy with the angel theme...I do that too much. sweatdrop I don't remember when I wrote this, or if there was any reason I wrote it other than the fact I was in the shower and thus, automatically, my brain was working for some reason. In fact, almost everything I've written in the shower is a song...the reason for that probably is because I have to remember what it is after I get out, so giving it a beat makes it easier to remember. Anyhow, here is the stupid repetative annoying poem. stressed Simple Gift I give up my clarity and my fame I give up my God forsaken name My shield and my sword and the fire ignite That leaves me lying breathless on the floor You can have it all 'cause I don't want it anymore God knows I don't want to be an angel Lord knows I wasn't meant to be an angel Still I have these wings Still I have these thoughts Still I fall to my knees and I seek holy spots And I Can't live this life anymore I'll make a mistake and start another Holy war Inside myself again I'm beside myself again Oh, and I don't want to be an angel It's far too hard to be an angel To stand here and watch you die It's hard to be an angel And stand here and watch you sin Again and again and again I'm a simple gift From up above One wing dipped in your sinful blood God knows I don't want to be an angel Lord knows I wasn't meant to be an angel Still I have these dreams Still I stayed and fought Still I fall to my knees as I watch you rot And I don't want to be an angel Why do I have to be an angel? Clip my wings Set me free 'Cause I don't want to be Your angel Last Note: Eh, just thought that you might not understand all the little phrases and meanings in it...but that's okay...if you simply must know about something that you didn't understand PM Gramma Rassie and she'll tell you. [but homigawsh Gramma Rassie is me. ninja ] PS: Sorry if this is random and unintelligible, I'm sleep deprived times pi. PSS: Remember everyone, there's other poems besides this one, go ahead and read those and leave comments too...I like them more.... sweatdrop

Posted by: Rass Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 07:05am

[b:723929a83e]A First On TV

This is the twentieth century,
you are there, preparing to skin
a human being alive. Your part
will be to remain calm.[/color:723929a83e][/b:723929a83e]

-David Ignatow[/color:723929a83e][/align:723929a83e]

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Commented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 07:11am


	Wow..I have such a rodent-like attention span I can pretend I can understand this one. whee

Commented on: Tue May 03, 2005 @ 06:56pm


	I think I get it...but you know how that cancer is with ****** up our reading comprehension. I think I like it though...maybe I'll read it again in a week and see if it makes more sense. 3nodding heart**

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Commented on: Tue May 03, 2005 @ 07:27pm


	- very indepth. . .thats sort of a turn of to me but i respect the amount of thought that can go into such pieces. keep it up domokun

Commented on: Wed May 04, 2005 @ 01:45am


	I love it! It rocks! I'm horrible at constructive criticism but I can offer praise! xp

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Commented on: Fri May 06, 2005 @ 12:16am


	It's so beautifully composed...Rammstein even had a song with "God knows I don't want to be an angel."

Commented on: Fri May 06, 2005 @ 01:04pm


	echo_sandwich It's so beautifully composed...Rammstein even had a song with "God knows I don't want to be an angel." It is a pretty cliche line I think. ninja I think I've heard Rammstein a total of once. neutral Twas...interesting to say the least.

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Commented on: Sun May 08, 2005 @ 08:30pm


	Wow!!! That was really good! I wish I could write like that xd 3nodding I also noticed your signature! Sabriel? If it's the book then I've read that and the follow up called Lirael! and am currently reading the third book Abhorsen!^.^ 3nodding

Commented on: Thu May 12, 2005 @ 10:38pm


	Hmm..it's definetely unique lol 3nodding It got me kindof depressed though >.< Maybe something a bit more cheery?

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Commented on: Fri May 13, 2005 @ 05:23am


	I like it. I'll wager the melody you have in mind is really interesting. Nice work. domokun

Commented on: Sun May 22, 2005 @ 04:36am


	I like this too, I think it's very interesting. Some reason it comes off as it could have been a rap song, but that's just what I thought at first, then when I thought about it, it might not be. Anyway, I like it, I think I can understand.

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Commented on: Sun Jul 17, 2005 @ 11:15am


	"Hmmm, this one is hard to understand. My thought is your saying you wish nto to be someones gaurdian angel and watch them do hurtful things to them such. Like, your watching a friend or family member hurting themselves. ^^ If thats not the metaphor then I missed. None the less, I love this one as well. "

Commented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 04:56am


	Wow, I enjoyed this poem. I suppose I don't understand everything but what I did interpret was very meaningful to me. I shall print a copy and keep it with me always D': I love your work! <3

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Commented on: Thu Jan 05, 2006 @ 11:15am


	I think this is very good. I have felt like this before and yet I ahevn't I don't know. This one really makes me think... Great write hun!!! Cassandra

Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 03:28pm


	It definatly seems like a song.It has powerful lyrics but no hidden meaning.Maybe you should write songs aswell. I dont know where you get the inspiration to write these but they're all great.

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