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This poem isn't finished yet, it needs refining I have too much of a headache to go on and on about this poem and how much it sucks, but apparently it's not that bad. Of course, everyone that has read it knows who it's inspired off of, so for all I know it might be bad and only people who know the person think it's good because of knowing the person. ::shrug:: Either way here you go. It was inspired off Mizu-chan from MPL because she's cool like that or something. heart 15 awesome points to anyone who knows what the last stanza is referring to. surprised For Mizu Think Blue Not red Not yellow Not orange Think Blue Blue That amazing color that sits at the top of the color wheel Half the winning formula for green and purple Green The color of life Purple The color of royalty And they'd be nothing without Blue The world looks so different through Blue tinted glasses So different So interesting So beautiful The Blues Lifes sorrow rolled up with some jazz Blue Grass Lifes joys played by backhome yokels Blue The color of the infinite sky Blue The color of the worlds oceans Blue A baby's eyes... All that is true in life is Blue And all that is true in Blue is life So when all of heaven's in a rage Because of a silly redbreast in a cage Just remember to Think Blue EDIT:: I felt like responding up here to part of a comment made. 3nodding The comment was Quote: I never really got mizu-chan's Think Blue motto.. I'm more of an optimist, really. The poem isn't pessimistic. It's actually pretty optimistic, as is mizu's "Think Blue" motto and my sisters answer to everything being blue, and her frequent random comment of "everything is blue". Blue is often seen as the melancholy color, sad and alone. But the poem is outlining how blue is in everything, and how there is nothing worth while without blue. I guess, if we want to get all symbolic, it can be seen as saying that without things that make you sad you can never truly be happy, that sadness is what life is, but with that sadness is the joy. PS: Remember kids, there's more poems here, read them too plzkthxbai heart

Posted by: Rass Tue Jan 24, 2006 @ 03:21am

[b:723929a83e]A First On TV

This is the twentieth century,
you are there, preparing to skin
a human being alive. Your part
will be to remain calm.[/color:723929a83e][/b:723929a83e]

-David Ignatow[/color:723929a83e][/align:723929a83e]

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Paranoidguy
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Commented on: Thu Jan 26, 2006 @ 03:55am


	nice poem... i wish i could write poems... mine dont rhyme sad

Commented on: Thu Jan 26, 2006 @ 09:14am


	Your poems are great :3 i've tried to make some poems but i have no talent whee

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Commented on: Fri Jan 27, 2006 @ 02:52am


	Awesome poem, I love the theme. It's so true! mrgreen Bravo on excellent craftsmanship!

Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 03:01pm


	Thats really good.That one poem is possibly the best(after the Raven by EAP) poem ive ever read.

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Commented on: Sun Jan 29, 2006 @ 08:32am


	hey nice colour mi fav awsome poem cooooooooooooooooooooool !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Commented on: Sun Jan 29, 2006 @ 08:45am


	Is the last stanza in reference to William Blake's Auguries of Innocence? I enjoyed it. I attempt to write poetry, though I don't really succeed. So instead I love Poe. (Displacement! I can't write too well, so I read Poe, and relate to that instead. biggrin ) I want a Poe Bobble head. I am rambling. Keep up the good work. razz

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Commented on: Tue Feb 07, 2006 @ 05:38pm


	That poem is pretty cool...I wish I could write for more than crap. I'm ok at poetry, but everything else I suck at. About the last stanza...I have no freakin idea.

Commented on: Tue Feb 07, 2006 @ 08:08pm


	The whole thing altogether reminds me of that Eiffel 65 song, "Blue" (I'm blue, da-ba-dee da-ba-da.. etc.) Last stanza reminds me of the song "Bullet with butterfly wings" by the Smahing Pumpkins =D As you can see I listen more to music than I read poetry.. although I never really got mizu-chan's Think Blue motto.. I'm more of an optimist, really. Okay poem, not awesome, but clearly worth reading =)

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Commented on: Tue Feb 07, 2006 @ 11:02pm


	i like it. it has a nice ring to it. ive really never been too good with words so im not very good at poetry or song writing or anything.

Commented on: Tue Feb 14, 2006 @ 09:38pm


	very nice....it is beautifully written... heart domokun

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Commented on: Tue Mar 14, 2006 @ 01:29am


	i'm pretty sure i'm wrong on this but in the last stanza,couldn't it go it's a robin in a cage whishing for the BLUE of the sky? freedom? and couldn't the robin represent anyone of us if we're dreaming of any type of freedom? .....ok,well just my odd thoughs there.... rolleyes

Commented on: Thu May 04, 2006 @ 06:46am


	I liked your poem a lot. I can't do poems about colors, I can only do depressing poems. laughs Anyways, keep up the good work. All of your poems I've read so far I've liked a lot.

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