Prologue Hidden in Antarctica is a great world of magic. You know Antarctica isn’t really a frozen barren landscape that is just what the humans think and see but it actually has great forests and cities. It isn’t a whole solid continent but is many giant islands. They are full of wizards, knights, werewolves, vampires, rogues, some anthros, and a few Dinoninjas. An anthro is a person that is cursed by a wizard to become half-human and half-animal. Every being in Antarctica has an aura and their own special talent. An aura represents what they stand for and who they are. Auras can be darkness, light, water, fire, poison, mixed, and there are other types too. One of the biggest islands is Dark Island where this story begins and where danger lurks around every corner. Whether you chose to come or not Dark Island is calling to you.
Chapter 1: Luxe 8 Years Ago
A little boy named Luxe is waiting for his friend Keli to come. Keli is his best friend and is like him in a lot of ways. She has no family either but she lives with a town guard named Martin Cartwright . When she wanted to know about her ancestors and parents he would let her search in old records only certain people like guards could see. She learned that her family was a great clan of ninjas. So she vowed that one day she would become a ninja also. Luxe thought she was very nice when they met and they became best friends. So today Luxe asked if she would hang out with him in the Dark Woods because he was lonely.
Luxe is pretty much always lonely because he has no family and no memory of his parents. When he was one his parents dumped him into a Dark City orphanage. So he made a lot of good friends and they became his family. Luxe only had one enemy a vampire named Zeke. Luxe hears a sound and looks over to a cottage that belongs to a mean old wizard. He was specialized in training people to become whatever they wanted to be like a ninja or a summoner and he had many books on how to become something.
Luxe sees that Keli is trying to get into it. He runs over and tries talking to her. “Hey KELI!!! Don’t try to get in or the wizards gonna hurt you” Luxe yells at her while sprinting across the clearing. Keli kicks the door open and runs inside. “Keli!!! STOP!!!” Luxe yells. He runs inside and finds Keli looking at a book. “Keli what is so important that you risk your life breaking into a wizard’s house”? “Luxe I had to do this so I could become a ninja like the rest of my family and the only way I could learn was to find a trainers book and this wizard had one and Martin couldn’t afford it so I had to steal it” Keli explains. “Well then lets get out of here before he returns” Luxe says. So they start to head out when the wizard begins to walk towards his cottage. So Luxe and Keli start running away from the wizard. But he says a charm and stuns them so they can’t run away. “Well, well, well, what have we here? Oh two little kids stealing a book from a wizard tsk tsk kids today” the wizard says to them. He examines it and says to Keli “so little girl do you know the penalty for stealing from a wizard” he asks. She shakes her head at him. “Well I am going to have to put an anthra on you which will make you half-human and half-human but I will be nice and let you pick what animal you want but hurry” he says. Luxe looks over at her and sees she looks scared so he says “Put the anthra on me and forget her and this incident” Luxe says. “No the anthra goes on the girl or both of you” the wizard tells them. Next Luxe started talking in a soft hypnotizing voice that didn’t sound like his. It was hypnotizing and later on he would learn that it was a part of his unique talent and how to use it. “Let her go and give us the book and leave” Luxe said. The wizard hands Keli the book and walks away. Then out of nowhere he gets out his wand and shoots an anthra curse at Luxe. Keli warns and jumps in the way but then it ends up hitting both of them. They then start running through the forest to their hideout. As their running their senses amplify and they can see further hear better and run faster. “Luxe what’s going on are we changing” Keli asks. Luxe nods his head and is looking through all the tress trying to find their clubhouse that Martin built for them and then he sees it covered with vines and leaves for cameo. Once they get there they rest and check out their new forms. Keli is part cat and has a tail, claws, cat ears, very sensitive hearing, and lightning fast reflexes. Luxe is now part raccoon and has a tail, raccoon ears, claws, great agility, and is very sneaky. Their personalities had a little of their animals inside them but didn’t change them very much. After that Keli offered Luxe a home and he accepted it. So then Keli and Luxe grew up together and became as close as a brother and sister. They would help each other out and would search together for information about who they were and their families. Then Luxe got finally got a lead on his parents.
good story.i noticed that u have it in present tense also cheak ur spelling u put down half-human and half-human
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Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 12:39am
that was good :] keep making more
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Jahromi Community Member
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Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 06:42am
kwestions:
1. do you think that kelly and I expected you to make her your best friend? 2. was it just coincidence that you also made her a ninja in your story too? 3. did you ever revise your typing? I do that after every submit on mine.
just let me know whenever i do come in.
DemonSpawnRawr Community Member
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Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 01:04am
coolio
magnum-pi G Community Member
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Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 07:49pm
jason is right...from what i've heard thats odd that u put that stuff in...w/e
weirdgirl23 Community Member
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Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 01:11am
I READ UPPP UNTILL SHE WANTED TO FIND OUTZ ABOUT HER ANCESTORZZ