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Father into your hands I commend my spirit, Father into your hands. Why have you forsaken me? In your eyes foresaken me? In your thoughts foresaken me? In your heart foresaken me? Trust in my self-righteous suicide. I cry when angels deserve to die...
Perfection
Do you know how beautiful you are?
With your beaming smile
With your glimmering eyes
With your brilliant laughter
It enlightens me to hold you in my sight
You and your wonderful face and spectacular body
You are perfection.
Do you know how special you are?
With your impressive talents
With your intriguing aura
With your adorable shyness
It enlightens me to hold you in my thoughts
You and your gifted mind and skillful hands
You are perfection.
Do you know how happy you make me?
With your immortal optimism
With your humble genorosity
With your impeccable honesty
It enlightens me to hold you in my heart
You and your uplifting voice and down-to-earth character
You are perfection.
Do you know how much I love you?
With your outstanding sense of humor
With your immeasurably calming effect
With your inate ability to leave me flustered with these words to describe you, as words are not enough
It enlightens me to hold you in my life
You and your entire being and unbridaldly joyful soul
You are perfection.
Do you know how beautiful you are?
Do you know how special you are?
Do you know how happy you make me?
Do you know how much I love you?
You are perfection.






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Kida Yuri
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 06, 2005 @ 02:22pm
As most of you should know, almost all of my posted poems are depressing. I would like to announce that this is the first happy poem I've ever written. It was kind of hard, but once I started thinking of the person I was dedicating this to, it became so easy. I think the only difficulty I had was trying to choose the perfect words for this perfect person. It was hard only being able to pick a few words because this person means the world to me and I want her to feel that way. I will write a better poem in the future dedicated to her. It isn't that good, but for a first time I don't think I did half bad. Let me know how I did!


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 11, 2005 @ 04:58am
YAAAAY!!! Good poem. It left a nice warm happy feeling in my heart! I love it! Keep up all the good writing stuff! blaugh heart



Yunako Aori
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Kida Yuri
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 13, 2005 @ 01:42am
^-^ Thank you Yunie! I wrote it for a specific person! Someone very special to me! I wrote this with all of the feelings in my heart toward this person. They mean the absolute world to me and if they ever see this, I hope this opens their eyes even a teeny weeny little bit about how I feel about them. I wanted them to feel loved and I hope I succeed! ^_^


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 13, 2005 @ 02:27am
eek Wow, Kida! You did so well! It is such a beautiful, heart-warming poem, and awesome poem at the same time. I loved it! And I think I know who you are talking about ninja



Shia Ayanokoji
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Kida Yuri
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 14, 2005 @ 02:37pm
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Wow, Kida! You did so well! It is such a beautiful, heart-warming poem, and awesome poem at the same time. I loved it! And I think I know who you are talking about


eek really?? pm me who you think it is...


commentCommented on: Thu Feb 10, 2005 @ 02:19pm
me thinks me knows, too!



Andrea Tyler
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 11, 2005 @ 02:39am
Kida, it's me Alicia. Who'd you write it for? I'm curious. I promise not to tell anybody! heart ya!


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