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Confessions and Hopes. All Merged Into The Spine of This Journal.


Shimmering Ice Comet
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Watching an angel fly away.
If I could only hold your hand,
sighing high above the trees,
fliying off to never land,
where love is the only disease,
rolling happily through the meadows,
climbing mountains oh so tall,
never cast into the shadows,
It would be worth it all,
make your heart believe the true word,
that my love is never fake,
over all these years I have learned,
no stress is too hard to take,
put away my loaded gun,
throw the knife straight out the door,
my reel of hatred has spun,
suicidal thoughts no more,
just knowing that you love me,
no other hold so pure,
trying so hard to break free,
what of, I'm not quite sure,
promise you'll never lie to me,
and I'll believe every part,
and please try to love me,
with every inch throughout your golden heart,
sawying branches in the tree tops,
hold the soul I've always known,
the gentle breeze of the air lofts,
make me feel at home,
the gentle tears down your face,
create a river in my mind,
wish they'd leave without a trace,
but the end I'll never find,
Hold me close my loved one,
even closer than before,
I'll bring out the light of the sun,
and give you the mighty life it bore,
I only asked the bible,
why an angel had to die,
now there is a great rival,
between my face and my cry,
I watched you fly away from me,
to a far much better place,
i'm glad that you got to break free,
but your love I cannot replace,
As i beg for God's mercy,
on my knees in great plead,
I wish you could return to me,
but your soul has been set free.

I have one last question for you,
was it YOU I really knew?





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-EllaD EllaR-
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 12:56am
Good job Lily! Keep it up!
Your words are so true.
*huggles*


comment Commented on: Mon Nov 13, 2006 @ 10:27pm
I put myself in my girlfriend's shoes in this poemand she is basically talking to me. This was during our first little spat, yet it had so much reasoning. I had not told Lina the complete truth on something and that displeased her in many ways i am guessing, so i made this poem dedicated to her. I love her so much, but i thought I had lost her there. I love you baby girl heart



Shimmering Ice Comet
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AmericanTigerLily13
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comment Commented on: Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 12:09am
Great poem Lily... but you seemed to be ALOT more upset the other day when u and i talked... you were sobbing like crazy... so how are u and lina doing now? not tht its really any of my business..... but im just checking in on you...


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